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Now that's an amazing chapter! First, I'd like to thank you for revising the chapter. You didn't have to adhere to our complaints, but you nonetheless responded. Second, I loved the way this chapter panned out, and how the battle played out differently from the other one. Then of course, you put in your twist-cliff-hanger... Just, excellent.
I just hope Guy is alright! |
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