The Roses Curse (Muertos Moon)

[Ropeburn]

PROLOGUE

I woke up, it was only a dream. I was dreaming about me finding my family, though, I know that pirates killed them in the accident. Tomarrow is The Muertos Moon, Rose. Jolly said to me. Jolly treated me like his own daughter, He treated me like his own blood. He once told me, "You have my heart, and I am ur armor, and I will destroy anybody who would even dare to harm you." Hes not really a bad guy all he wants to what he was supposed to have, But somehow karma backfired and made him into a evil-looking person. When I tried to help him, I tried to make a potion to turn him back to normal for just at least a day for him to be happy again, the potion backfired, It gave me a curse, Every friday the 13th, and at halloween, I turn myself and every pirate whose skin gets touched by the moonlight becomes undead, and jolly becomes human, though mortals like pirates can't see him human though but I can. During the Muertos Moon Pirates are to battle each other to the death, Once they die, the curse wears off.


I hope you like this new series, Im focusing on the evil side's point of view and trying to show the good side of evil Please comment

[CaptainMonkeys]

That's a pretty bad potion...

[Ropeburn]

I woke up crying, I was dreaming if Rose ever survived the accident. I wonder whats she think, whats shes seeing. Life here as a pirate is hard, You can die at any time here. Rumor around here is that a woman named rose is the cause of all of the invasions, and the Muertos Moon, The curse will be happening tomarrow, Good thing I got the most powerful weapon here in the carribean! The sword of El patron... None is a hard match for me. I am prepared for what jolly gives to me.


Hope you like this chapter Its called poppy's journal

[KeeperOfTheCode]

You may want an editor. If you're going to write a story, you won't say 'ur'. You'll say 'you're'. I'm intrigued by this idea. I might try something like that myself...

[CaptainMonkeys]

I'm good at editing Nice second chapter, I like how it's short so I don't have to read a lot.

[angel 4ever]

nice rose

[Ropeburn]

Poppy
I walked towards her I feel her radiation of death. She seems like she had been abused or neglected, I asked her
"Why are you here."
knowing that she will give me a pointless answer.
"The moon is almost here poppy, I don't want a face like you to be hurt."
The woman said as she waves her staff in the wind she creates a enormous ball of fire Though, The fire is blue and seems intensely hotter than ur normal ball of fire. I glance down to see her face, She slowly turns undead, and green The sky turns green. She hits me with that fire ball, before I knew the Muertos moon came. Everyone became into skeletons, from Tortuga, all the way to Padres del Fuego. It seemed like the world is in chaos now



Hope you like this chapter, Its the first one!!! the others were prologues.

[CaptainMonkeys]

...I like prologues. Pretty good.

[blaster54]

bah......................

[CaptainMonkeys]

What was that for??

Keep writing, Rose!