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04-09-2011, 02:00 AM

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The chapters are a bit short, maybe you can be a bit more descriptive?

I know Del is infamous for making long chapters, and I know this story's supposed to be funny, not dramatic, but maybe you can write your chapters a little longer and more detailed.

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