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Chapter 4
The Odd Brew
Cinder, Good and I ran out of the fort and across the path. We get to my ship the Scarlet Sabre, which is miraculously still mourned to the dock. I go in to my cabin and a voice says "Drink the magic brew it will help remember you the fate of that night." I spin around and there is a small red bottle right on the floor. I pick it up and drink some. I begin to see the night of the escape from the EITC Armory. "You were betrayed by him. He left you to die. But I saved you'" the voice says. " Mother," I yell "No it cant be you." A blue hand reaches out and touches my face. " Yes it is my son."
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