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On the high seas: the book
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07-31-2010, 06:58 PM
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On the high seas: the book
Prologue Two days, three nights we have been at sea. They are coming. I hope you get this message Jason the eitc black gaurd have me in the brig of the ship of the line, The Interpid Sincerely yours, Captian Del More to come soon |
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07-31-2010, 07:02 PM
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Its kinda short...
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07-31-2010, 07:24 PM
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"Jason, Jason shorewrecker?" a man asks me. I turn around and see my old cabin boy now a young adult. "Hector Whalefish. Good to see you lad." He gives me a peice of parchment. I read it and say to Hector as i put my pistol to his head " You dare give me the black spot." I pull the hammer on the pistol back. "Wait wrong note." he pulls out another note saying Captain Del has been Captured. I shoot the pistol at a eitc assasian that just threw a knife at me. "Run" i yell to hector. Last edited by jl102pond; 07-31-2010 at 07:43 PM.. |
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#4
07-31-2010, 07:36 PM
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You may want to check some of your spelling.
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08-01-2010, 01:40 PM
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Heres the next chapter:
I meet with Hector at the kings arm. Just then we look outside and see a huge ship , The Interpid. "Thats the ship" hector says. I go outside and see Captain Del walk off the ship. He asks me " How do ye like my new ship." He goes on to explain that he killed all of the gaurds himself and comondeered the ship. The End Oh and did i mention he found 17 lost sowrds of el patron on that ship. 
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08-01-2010, 02:56 PM
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