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A pirate story
January 23, 1729 "Goodnight sweetie see you in the morning." Those where the last words i ever heard from my mother and father, They were taken to the EITC for what they thought of my mother and father as "pirates". back then I was younger, I didn't even know what a "pirate" is. Till one day... It was a brisk morning mother and father weren't taken yet. My mother told me to go down to the docks to collect some crabs for lunch. When i look to my right i found this man looking a bit groggy, limping around the town. I walked towards him, and asked him, "Sir, do you need help?" That groggy man looked me dead in the eye and told me, "What do you think?! Im a pirate thats scrached up and beaten! And yes, I do need help." As I helped him get to my Fathers shop I asked the groggy man, whats a pirate? He told me that they man ships, live freely, and can become the most notorious person in the Carribean! I never knew what that man's name was, but I hope I will soon find him. From that day on I finally found out who I want to be. Hope u like this diary chapter. and i do ask for Ranting, commenting, for ways to make the story better.-Dont hate, appreciate
Last edited by Ropeburn; 07-28-2010 at 04:53 PM.. |
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There's no shame in 'borrowing' writing styles. Look at some of mine if you're ever in need.
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August 19, 1729 Mother and Father left, I am still hoping they get back. Its been 3 months since They were taken from the EITC, I am still waiting. How long do i have to wait? Im probebly sure they were beheaded, but I am still keeping hope. So far making a living from working in the Royal Anchor. Though, im secretly learning my swordsmanship skills to defeat every EITC scum there is! For what they did to Mother and Father, and for what they are going to! Though for now I need to find a crew. Yes, thats right! I need to find a crew to help me take down EITC. Though, for now, I need to at least have enough money to buy a ship, so far im 92 gold coins from earning my ship. ![]() ![]() ![]() Hope u like this diary chapter!!! i do ask for you to Rant, to help me make the story better ![]() ~Dont hate, appreciate ![]() ![]()
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RANT RANT RANT. :P Just kidding.
Anyways I like how you incorporate big things to come. I know something exciting will happen soon! |
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Dog, i think u dont really know what will happen soon......
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You buy a ship. Or your gold gets stolen. THE END
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#7
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NOooo, the tavern gets blown up from the Partners N Crime 100 member party and your put outta business.
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