Excalibur 52.

[Jackfiresteel]

Ok so new pirate, new guild, Cresty mentioned the word "story".

Here it is. Story of Jacks coming into PNC.. and another mysterious... group.

CHAPTER 1 - THE BEGINNING

It was a foggy and misty morning, and Jack was sleeping on his little dingy. He had been on it for 6 days now. "Mmmm.. DANG mist.. and fog.. arrgh.. me eyes.." he said. He rubbed his eyes and groaned. Then something fell in his eyes. "ARRGH DANG BIRDS" he said. But it wasn't a bird.. it was a raindrop. He soon realized.. a storm was coming. At first small waves of water tapped his little raft.. but then.. a wave so large even the largest galleon could not withstand. It had the power to sink over 10 trading ships. And the only thing that stood in its path.. was Jack Firesteel's dingy.

7 DAYS AGO.

"I see your 1000 gold.. and raise you 2000" said a stranger. "arrgh.. I see your 2000 gold and raise you... my ship." said Jack. "Hmm your desperate aren't you Jack Firesteel..?" said the stranger. "No. Im just bored.. hehe. Not unlike you.. Jack Sparrow" "Are you sure? Because I have *lays down cards* royal flush.. hehe" said Sparrow. "NO YOU CHEATED!" "I know how ye might think that.. but *pulls up sleeves and empties pockets* first time Ive won.. and not cheated. Hehe. I guess thats me ship now Jack." said Sparrow. "Huh.. alright.. fine. You get my ship." said Firesteel. "Lets go see that ship of yours" said Sparrow.

The pair walk to the dock to find a tiny ship, but a ship nonetheless. "You call this a ship!?!" yelled Sparrow. "Aye. Dont give me grief. My luck hasn't been great.." said Firesteel. "Alright ill take it." sighed Sparrow. "But just because I'm such a great and nice person ill lend you my old dingy. Now I suggest you get off Port Royal. There are Navy Guards running around everywhere!"



*The wave crashed against, and over the little dingy and Jack went overboard"



When he woke up he was in a room. There was a humanoid blur standing above him.
"Nnngh.. whos there..?" Firesteel said. "Calm down, Jack, calm down" he said. "Where am I!?" Jack yelled. "We... are.. going... to tell... you everything.. about.. us Jack..." he said.

Something came over him. It felt like he was being attuned. Then all of a sudden he went unconscious. When he woke up he was tied to a chair and 3 other people were standing in front of him. Then.. the questions swarmed him. "WHO ARE YOU?!" "HOW DID YOU GET HERE!?" "HOW DID YOU FIND US!?" And the only answers they got is "WHERE AM I!?" "UNTIE ME!" Shouted Jack. "*a figure approached* My name is Yanto Jones. We protect pirates from Jolly Roger, The EITC, and the Navy, and everyone else, We, are Excalibur. *Jack felt himself being attuned, and then everything went black*

END OF CHAPTER ONE

Note: This is just the first chapter I will start working on the second chapter... right now! Here is a little preview of the second chapter.

You will find out what exactly Excalibur is, where Jack is, and what happens to Jack his encounter with Excalibur.

This is my first story :P but dont be scared to give me criticism.

[Dog Firestack]

I like how you give that ciffhanger in the end. I also like how you tie in Jack Sparrow and his cards of cheating ( was he? ) I would like to know what you had in your hand though? That would be interesting to know.

So far very good, but I think you need to let the flow go a tad more. You need to go from one to another with great flow.

Typo here, Hmm your desperate aren't you Jack FIresteel...?

your is changed to you're.

[Inese_Sparrow]

Ye know, Jack, yer story is really good, and waiting now for chapter two to come! Nice, that story is not very long, it says all things shortly and to the point. I like it!

[muffin pirate]

So many good stories! LoL Nice Job there jack.

[Jackfiresteel]

Thanks guys!

And with the help of Crestshot I present you..

CHAPTER 2 - REMEMBER

When he woke up he was in a bed. He sat up and looked around. There was a little table next to his bed with a mug of rum on it, a door, and a window. He also saw his belongings by his bed. He emptied the mug in 2 gulps.

He stood up and opened the door. There were stairs. He walked down the stairs to find a tavern. He read a sign above the door. "Skulls Thunder… I’m in Padres Del Fuego...?" said Jack. He went and got some rum and sat down. He caught a man looking at him. "Hello there," said Jack. The man stood up and seemed to start to approach him but he turned away and started to walk out the door. As the stranger started leaving, Jack spotted an insignia, and under it, said "Exaclibur 52". That name sounded extremely familiar. The man seemed extremely familiar.

Jack followed the stranger out the door, but he didn't want the man to see him. He followed the stranger all the way to Fort Dundee. He felt something touch his legs, but when he looked down, nothing was there. When he looked back at the stranger, he had disappeared. He looked around for him, and he went inside the fort to look for him. Unfortunately, a guard spotted him. He went and hid behind a wall. But as he looked around for a cutlass he found none, when he looked back there was a barrel. "That wasn't there before..."

When he looked inside a barrel there was an extremely beautiful, expensive looking cutlass, and a piece of parchment with beautiful writing on it. The guard has found him. He grabbed the parchment and the cutlass. The guard tried to stab him, Jack parried, and kicked him down, he then dispatched the guard. Then he sneaked away. "I hate these places…" grunted Jack. When he left the fort he looked back and ran into a tree. Then all of a sudden, the ground underneath him trembled and fell. Jack fell into the hole he had made.

He looked around and found that he was in a cave, much like Beckett’s Quarry. In fact, it was Beckett’s Quarry. He stood up and started walking to his right. He tried his best to avoid the EITC Guards. He remembered that he had a parchment. He read it and it said, "Hello Jack Firesteel. Make use of this cutlass. We will see you soon."

He kept walking until he reached a circle. There were EITC and Navy Guards all around it. He recognized one of them. It was Samuel. He had run into him before. There was no way to sneak by them. He didn't even know where he was going. He knew what he had to do. He had to use his Voodoo Doll on them. He really didn't like using it. It made him weak and tired. He had no choice. He took out his doll, and attuned them all. They all felt it and ran toward him. He took their lives. He saw some footprints near the column in the center of the cave. These weren't the Guards’ footprints. Its toe was pointed, not round. It looked like a boot-print. He looked at it closer and put his hand on the column for support, his back hurt.

When his hand pressed against the rock it opened. "This... is a door!" he said "The column is hollow..." He went inside and found stairs.

He walked down the stairs to find a room. There were 3 doors around it. The room was round, not a common cube. Out of one of the doors a man walked out. He wore a large hat, a black coat, black vest, a red shirt, black pants, and black pointed boots. He was the person Jack was following.

"Hello Firesteel." he said. "What... is this place.." said Jack. Then something struck his skull, and he went unconscious.

When he woke up he was in a chair. A man walked in. It was that same man. "Hello again Firsesteel" he said. "ARRGH! Why do you keep knocking me out!?" Jack shouted. "Well because one, so you don’t see the contents of this location, and 2, because it’s fun messing with people," said the man.

"Alright you've gotten me, what do you want with me?" said Jack. "Well first off I want to know why you were following me." asked the stranger. "You seemed familiar to me. And you were looking at me..." answered Jack. “Alright then,” the stranger responded. "Who are you… why do you seem so familiar..?" said Jack. "My name is Yanto Jones. I am the Guildmaster of an.... organization, called Excalibur 52." "Why 52?" "Because this is the 52nd attempt at the guild. We protect...."
"....Pirates, from EITC, Navy, Jolly Roger, and all other threats. I remember now. Where is this place..?" said Jack. "Oh yes. I forgot I wiped your memory. You are sitting in our head quarters." "Your HQ is in Beckett’s Quarry?" said Jack. "Yes. Hide the HQ in our enemies territory. We did that because we are clever and smart." said Yanto. "Alright then... what happened to the other 51 Excaliburs?" asked Jack.

"Gone. Dead. Over. Either the guildmasters died, the guild corrupted, or the guildmembers turned on each other and died. Excalibur 2 GM, his ship sunk. Excalibur 6 GM, his guildmates turned on him and each member killed him. Excalibur 23, GM and his officers on a ship. Sunk by the kraken. Excalibur 36, GM mauled by alligators. This is not a friendly guild. We have a hard job. But we are well equipped. We have the best cutlasses, pistols, daggers.... dolls... and staves."

"So... why am I here?" asked Jack. "Because. We are recruiting." answered Yanto. "What!? NO! I am not joining your guild! I don’t think I could be at risk to die every day..." said Jack. "You're already at risk every day, with the EITC, Navy, Jolly and every other threat threatening you. Trust me you will be way better off here. You will be equipped with the best weapons. And you will be paid. But you can leave if you want to die quicker in your life. The door is over there. Just don’t let the EITC Guards see you." said Yanto.

"Alright. I’ll join." said Jack.

"Good. 2 days. Sunrise. Don’t be late."

END OF CHAPTER 2

Coming so to a thea.. nevermind: Chapter 3 - First Day

[muffin pirate]

I like it... My problem, in some parts it flows and some it doesn't.

[Dog Firestack]

I was going to edit this morning Jack, I never got my chance last night, POF kept crashing and getting reset.

[Jackfiresteel]

Well you can edit Chapter 3. Its just Crestshot said she would edit it..

[KeeperOfTheCode]

For proper grammar, you start a new paragraph when another person starts talking. It makes it easier to understand and read.