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The Epic Tale of Captain Seagull
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01-22-2008, 06:57 AM
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The Epic Tale of Captain Seagull
Part 1 of my story below.
--------------------- The mutiny had begun. Captain Seagull could easily read the discontent in his men. He was sailing them to riches and they were losing faith. He was not surprised when quite suddenly he was surrounded by drawn swords. "I knew this was coming from the moment we ran out of rum..." The murmurs of the men were lost as the lookout yelled "Sail Ho!” A ghost ship drew into sight on the horizon. "You can mutiny now or survive this attack. Which is it mates?" To be continued... --------------------- Is it to long? And does it grab your attention? And should I have posted this here? If this is all good, then I know what I need the photo to be. But I want this okayed first.
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01-22-2008, 09:06 PM
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Thats the perfect size for a story, yes it grabs my attention, and you can post it here but it's better to post it at DoP in the writers/editors section as well.
Also, maybe get some people to stage the mutiny?
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01-22-2008, 09:12 PM
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Hmm, looks good to me. *does x-ray spell check vision* Yep, good. *tells Jack to do a editing sweep in case I missed anything*
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01-23-2008, 05:14 AM
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okay. I'll post there from now on. That's where I'll put my picture idea.
 It will probably take a bit to get the shot right.
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#5
01-23-2008, 01:30 PM
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You can post the picture here this time, SB already checked for errors. ^^
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01-27-2008, 10:22 PM
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aye here ya go jack, sorry if aint what ye wanted
Last edited by Chris; 02-17-2008 at 05:09 PM.. |
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01-27-2008, 10:33 PM
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I crashed, and was getting lag when I logged back on. What was the pics of?
~Cpt.Sea
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01-27-2008, 10:34 PM
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It was the picture quill_fire needed for her story.
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01-28-2008, 12:54 AM
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Ah ok, this story is for The POTCO Report right?
~Cpt.Sea
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01-28-2008, 01:10 AM
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were they good?
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01-28-2008, 01:12 AM
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yes and yes
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01-28-2008, 01:13 AM
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good i was worried to many titles were in the way and over lapping so thats why it took so long 
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01-28-2008, 01:18 AM
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I'm gonna use the second one anyways, since everyone must presume I'm captain seagull. ^^
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01-28-2008, 01:23 AM
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ok i liked that one better and figured u were gonna use that one the first was just a side and test picture
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01-29-2008, 06:49 AM
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for future notice, if you hit f12 all the tags and dissapear and leave just the people and ships. well...I know this works on my computer, don't know about everyone's. just didn't know if you knew. I only found out because my rabbit hopped on my keyboard while I was playing. The pics are good by the way.
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