The story of Dante...

[Johnny Storm]

This is the story that I made for my new pirate Dante, please take a look at it and tell me what you think.

I am Dante, a famous pirate who was feared by many. I sailed across the caribbean with my captain and fellow crew mates. As time passed I became feared across the Caribbean and hated by the EITC and Royal Navy. As my skills became more powerful I became more powerful than my captain. He also began to hate me and out of jealousy ordered my crew mates to battle me and throw me into the valcano at Padres Del Fuego. They did so and I fell in battle and was then tossed into the valcano, I thought this was my fate.

But a evil stood by in the shadows and watched as I was thrown into the valcano. This was none other than Jolly Roger looking for pirates to force into his evil army of the undead. He used his evil voodoo magic to turn me into one of his undead monsters. I had lost all of my free will and was forced to fight as one of the undead. As time passed many came to fear me even more when I was not undead. This fate I had been given was too harsh, even for a pirate.

During an invasion on tortuga I ran into one of my best friends in my former pirate life. She was a gypsy who was very powerful. She knew who I was and then said, Dante, what has that evil skeleton done to you!? She knew I had lost my free will and being very smart she used her voodoo powers to somewhat free me from my curse. I had gained my free will but was still a undead wraith. I then knew what I had to do, I must defeat Jolly to regain my honor and end his evil endevours to conquer the caribbean.

The invasion of tortuga was a loss and Jolly retreated to his hidden pirate lair. Weakend by the invasion Jolly was in no condition for battle, but he was still a deadly enemy. I aproched him and said, You evil monster, you shall never destroy us pirates!!! We then began to battle, he was weak, but still possesed many of his dark powers. I was nearly deafeated but I managed to bearly win. I was not able to defeat the evil skeleton but had weakend him greatly before I was forced to run away. Free of Jolly Roger's hold on my free will I wanderd the seas, still hated by my pirate brethren for being undead until one day I came across a mysterious women who had pity on me. She said, Poor undead soul, you have battled Jolly but are still cursed to be undead, you remind me of Davy Jones. This women was none other than Tia Dalma, she then picked up a voodoo staff and summoned powerful voodoo magic, returning me into my human form. She suddenly dissapeard. Finally free of the curse I returned to being a pirate, now more feared by the undead monsters than ever.

[Kat Five Knives]

Very nice - and creative Johnny. Did you reunite with your pirate bretheren? Did you find a home guild? or did you start your own?

[swordshot]

Wow kat lots of questions.lol. And johnny great story!

[Johnny Storm]

Well Kat the ending says that Dante went back to being a pirates so that is pretty much it, although he would never join his old crew again due to the fact that they betrayed him.

[Johnny Storm]

Hello, the other day I made a story of my pirate and decided to make another that follows where it left off. Tell me what you think.

I am Dante, the pirate who was betrayed by his crew and captain, forced into an undead army, and the pirate that nearly deafeated Jolly Roger in battle. After Escaping from the dreadful curse that had kept me undead, I returned to being a pirate, plundering, stealing, and drinking rum like never before. But this victory was short lived as another evil force waited in the shadows, wanting to conquer the caribbean.

While plundering in Padres Del Fuego in a remote area of the jungle there, a odd undead skeleton approched me, this was no ordinary skeleton, it was my former captain who had ordered me to be thrown to a fiery fate in a valcanoe. I said in confusion: what the heck has become of you, you no good traitor!? My former captain then said:You think that I just had you thrown into that valcanoe out of hate!? Please you should have known that I had another reason, By doing so I sold your soul to jolly roger so I could have powerful voodoo magic. But when you escaped from him he came after me and turned me into this monster. Now he has ordered me to destroy you!!!! We then fought, but he was no match for me and he failed.

Then Suddenly another beast appeared. This one seemed to be one of Jolly Rogers soilders but was very different from an unead skeleton, she appeared to be a gypsy or witch. You think that you have won!? The battles that you face have only begun pirate!!She said. The witch then attacked me, she was very powerful, possesing dark voodoo powers that no pirate had ever seen before. I had nearly defeated her when she flew into the air and said: Ha!!! I was not ordered here to destroy you but curse you once again!!! I replied: I dont care!!, your master Jolly will never end us pirates even with monsters like you!! You think my master is Jolly!!, She replied. Then she said: He is but a puppet who is working for our real master. Then suddenly she put a curse on me, transforming me into a odd creature, somewhat like and undead pirate, but different, I was not living, but not dead. What have you done you witch!!!,I said in an angry tone. She then said: This is necesarry if you are to serve my master.

Suddenly she dissapered and I was teleported against my own will to and odd forsaken island. On this island was a fort that seemed to be build by the undead pirates. Suddenly more of the wraith like creatures came at me fought me. I had managed to escape them by running away. I then hid, thinking what should I do now!? A huge building was ahead, I then procedded twords it, to fight the evil monster who had built this fort......

To be continued....well maybe, only if ppl like this story will I add the final chapter.

[Crestshot]

I think it's really good. I liked the first part, and I've got to admit, I'm curious as to who this big bad puppet master is. Nice Job!

[Johnny Storm]

This is the next part in the story of my pirates.

I procceded to the evil fortress being attacked my many wraiths who had my death in mind. Beating them I was able to make my way to the fort. The fort was oddly not guarded as many would think it would be. Then i discovered that the curse I was given had given me many powers that made me near invincible, appearntly the witch had failed and not gained controll over me. The fort was heavily armed with weapons and many barrels of gunpoweder were to be found. I wondered what were these monsters up to. As I entered an open area of the fort I was attacked by the wraith witch again. You shall not leave this place alive, she said in a scary tone. She then attacked me but was weakend by our fight before. I defeated her rather quickely but was then ambushed by more of the beasts. I knew what I had to do to escape. I took out my pistol and fired at a barrel of gunpowder. This set of many other barrels and the place began to shatter into peaces. I managed to escape onto a small ship and made my way to cuba.


Bearly able to walk a strange women aproched me. Oh what happen to you she said. I told her the story and she began to laugh in a evil tone. This women was Tia Dalma, then with voodoo magic she attacked me. You fool, you have made your own fate, we shall rule the caribbean now!!!She yelled. She then transformed into a odd demon like creature.I am Calypso, goddess of the seas and I shall be powerful once more she said. She battled me and was very deadly. I fought bravely but failed. Since you will die I will tell you my plan, she told me. I have not my powers thanks to you bothersome pirates, but all I need is one cursed soul to consume and I will be more powerful than ever, she yelled at me. Suddenly everything went dark and I awoke to find myself in a odd form. I was a spirit. She had succeded in destroying me but oddly had not completely consumed my soul. But still I was this cursed wraith that the witch monster had made me earlier. I wandered the seas for a few hours trying to warn my pirate breathren of the impending attack that Calypso was preparing. But all feared me. I then ended up on Port Royal. Is this my fate!? Am I doomed to wander as a cursed soul for eternity, I thought to myself. I can not let her get away with this, some how I would fight the Demon once again.

The story is not yet over....

[Johnny Storm]

This is the fourth and final part in the story line I made for my pirate. It is more epic and well written than the other parts of the story.


Calypso has attacked, with Jolly Roger's undead armada and her own army of evil demon like creatures they quickely took power over th caribbean. Calypso now had what she needed to make her powerful once again, the soul of a cursed pirate but she made a mistake and had not completely consumed my soul. The Bretheren Court has gathered together to combat the evil witch. All pirates across the seas have united to try and end her reign over our islands. Calypso Invaded Port Royal quickely taking Fort Charles from the Royal Navy and making it her own vanguard of a fortress. The brave pirates sailed to Port Royal to fight her, as they would play their part in this war, so would I.


Missunderstood and thought to be one of the wraith like creatures I was forced to hide in the underworld of caves on Port Royal. Still trapped in a spirit form and as a wraith like creature I had no idea how I would gain back my former life. I was ambushed by skeletons in the caves and I faught them, they were no match for me though and I then came across a odd part of the caves that had seemed to be empty for years. A odd building was ahead, statues of pirates from the distant past where scattered in the area, these pirates where famous and notorious and often thought to be myths. I entered the odd temple like building to see a platform in the middle of the building surrounded by giant crystals that looked like rubies surrounded by gold. Just then another creature approched me, this one not evil but more divine. ''Who are you spirit'' I asked to the ghost. ''I am the sister of Calypso who she killed in her selfish endevours to rule the seas, Me and my fellow gypsies saw this event long ago and build this tomb in order to aid you pirates in this war"she told me. "The witch has not completely stolen your soul, making her imperfect and not unvincible to you pirates, but she is powerful enough to fight, This plateform has ancient voodoo magic that is able to restore life to those who are not too far gone to recieve it. Since she only took part of your soul I will be able to restore you to mateiral form" said the spirit. I then stood one the plateform and then in a blast of brilliant light I was material again, still one of the wraiths but only more powerful. The voodoo had given me the power to destroy Calypso the spirit told me, Only when she falls shall her dark curse be broken on me. I then left the caves now knowing what must be done.



As I came to the light of the main land I saw the epic war between Jolly and my fellow pirate bretheren. Jolly too had more power, making him strong enough to take on one-hundred pirates at a time. Blast of cannons and grenades rattled the island as I made my way to my destiny. Suddenly more of the demon creatues appeared and attacked me, I battled them with my cutlass and daggers, whatever weapon I had seemed to do more damage to the monsters. It was appearent that Calypso wanted to ensure that the fate she intended on the Carribean as I battled many of the wraiths. My fellow pirate bretheren fought with great skill as well, easily freeing part of the island from Jolly's undead army. I then made my way to Fort Charles, now conquered by Calypso and made her own castle. I had procceded to battle Calypso as my pirate bretheren continued to fight the undead.



Fort Charles now twisted and dark was a great obsticle to over come. Fighting my way through dozens of undead skeletons I made my way to the center of the fort. Calypso stood at the area of the fort that overlooked the sea, waiting for me to fight her. Still I was ambushed by more wraiths but I managed to beat them. Then making my way twords Calypso I said:" Calypso!!! You shall not conquer the seas, as we pirate still stand to destroy you!!! How dare you turn a pirate into one of your wraith monsters!!!! "Well one must keep their friends close, and there enemies closer" said the vile goddess. "I may have failed to take your soul before, but will not do so again" she continued to say. She then flew into the air transforming into a vile demon like creature with wings and claws. This was not going to be a easy battle. "Now prepare to die Dante!!!" Calypso yelled. We then battled, swords crossed she was skilled in combat and used dark voodoo magic to attack me. Using every weapon I had I battle the witch, in my wraith form I was able to fight with even greater skill than before easily countering her attacks from the sky. She then summon more of her undead beasts to attack me, they where no match for me though, a battle that seemed to go on forever seen no end. But then I managed to weaken her to the point that she was forced to create a powerful sheild around herself using voodoo magic. "Surrender Dante, accept your fate and serve in my armada!!." She yelled at me. "Ill never fight for you, if I must die to even just help my pirate friends then so be it!!!" I replied. The battle raged on, and was nearing its end. The sheild she created was near invincible, I then knew how I could break it. Sommoning all the voodoo power I had, I striked the monster with my cutlass sword, destorying her shield and defeating her. "I shall return one day!!! I am the goddess of the sea and one day I shall have all your souls!!!"said Calypso. A bright light surronded the witch and then suddenly and huge explosion sound echoed the island, distracting every undead monster and pirate fighting as all attention turned to the fort. Suddenly as Calypso fell, all her voodoo power created a final explosion that destroyed her and Fort Charles. The fort shatted into pieces as the entire caribbean rattled from the event. Calypso had been defeated.


I woke to find myslelf in my human for again. Around me was the destroyed fort that shattered, I then stood, happy to finally be back in my human form and alive. With Calypso's defeat the demon like wraiths had lost all power and dissapered, Jolly too lost some power and was forced to retreat. With ease the caribbean was easily saved from Calypso. As I walked twords town I could hear many pirates cheering"Yo-Ho all together, hoist the colours high!! Yo-Ho theives and beggers, never shall we die!!!" they too helped in our victory over Calypso. Still Jolly possed as a threat, but I dont think he will ever be able to defeat us pirates.

The End

[Crestshot]

Nice ending mate. It seems like you elaborated a bit more on this final chapter than the rest of them. It almost seems like it comes back full circle to what's happening now in the game as well. Anyway, nice job!