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09-23-2008, 09:35 PM
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The Haunted Ship
I'm a very good writer myself, such writing short stories, 1-6 pages. I'm really in to make fire/ghost/haunted stories, so I'll give it a shot! (NOTE THIS STORY DOES NOT INCLUDE ME. ITS JUST A STORY.) Also below is just a preview! I'll get started with characters.
Characters Captain Blue (as the narrorator) Real Name: Alex Captain Black - a Captain who sells ships. Real Name: ??? The Parrot - an annoying bird Captain Orange - captain blue's friend; Real Name: ??? Jeff the Pirate - some annoying person who bug's captain blue alot; Real Name: Jeff Jack Sparrow wanna-be - the name says it all. Real Name: Jack Sparoon Some other non-important characters. (The names up here won't appear in the story as is, for example Jeff the Pirate, Jack Sparrow Wannabe) Story Preview "So, how ye be liking the ship?" He said. "Yeah, it's nice." I replied. "Good. I'm glad ye like it!" Then he left the ship. I went in my quarters to get some shut-eye. All of a sudden my door opens... "Hello? Whos there?" I say, scared. I walk out and nobodies there. Then the door slams behind me. All the info for now. - Chapter 2 coming tomorrow! - Last edited by Captain Seaford; 10-24-2008 at 01:07 AM.. |
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09-24-2008, 09:16 PM
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Alright guys, the first chapter is HERE!
Last edited by Captain Seaford; 10-05-2008 at 08:07 PM.. |
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09-24-2008, 10:06 PM
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great! keep on writing
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10-05-2008, 08:06 PM
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* Chapter 1 *
****CHAPTER 1****
-------------------------------- So today I bought myself a nice old War Frigate. It's big, with a lot of firepower! I bought it from some guy named Captain Black. I'm kind of new at being a pirate and all, so I might be a little choppy with the pirate language. "So how ye be liking the ship?" Captain Black asked. "Its awesome! I mean, Arrghh! I like it a lot!" I said embaressed. "You don't have to sound like a pirate that much you know." He whispered to me. "Squaaak!" That stupid old parrot which Captain Black has is SO annoying. I just wanna cut it's head off! Just then my friend, Captain Orange, came on my ship. "Big ship Alex!" "Please, call me Captain Blue." I demanded. "Ok, ok, Captain Blue..." -End of Chapter 1- |
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#5
10-23-2008, 11:59 PM
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No replys = No chapter 2!
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#6
10-24-2008, 12:41 AM
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you should make the chapters longer. It's good though
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10-24-2008, 01:07 AM
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hehe, first chapter is always the shortest! Other chapters will be longer, hehe
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10-29-2008, 06:52 PM
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sweet! cant wait to hear more!!!!
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