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Captain Seaford 09-23-2008 09:35 PM

The Haunted Ship
 
I'm a very good writer myself, such writing short stories, 1-6 pages. I'm really in to make fire/ghost/haunted stories, so I'll give it a shot! (NOTE THIS STORY DOES NOT INCLUDE ME. ITS JUST A STORY.) Also below is just a preview! I'll get started with characters.



Characters
Captain Blue (as the narrorator) Real Name: Alex
Captain Black - a Captain who sells ships. Real Name: ???
The Parrot - an annoying bird
Captain Orange - captain blue's friend; Real Name: ???
Jeff the Pirate - some annoying person who bug's captain blue alot; Real Name: Jeff
Jack Sparrow wanna-be - the name says it all. Real Name: Jack Sparoon
Some other non-important characters. (The names up here won't appear in the story as is, for example Jeff the Pirate, Jack Sparrow Wannabe)

Story Preview

"So, how ye be liking the ship?" He said.
"Yeah, it's nice." I replied.
"Good. I'm glad ye like it!" Then he left the ship. I went in my quarters to get some shut-eye. All of a sudden my door opens...
"Hello? Whos there?" I say, scared. I walk out and nobodies there. Then the door slams behind me.

All the info for now.

- Chapter 2 coming tomorrow! -

Captain Seaford 09-24-2008 09:16 PM

Alright guys, the first chapter is HERE!

Mr.LoveLocket 09-24-2008 10:06 PM

great! keep on writing :)

Captain Seaford 10-05-2008 08:06 PM

* Chapter 1 *
 
****CHAPTER 1****
--------------------------------
So today I bought myself a nice old War Frigate. It's big, with a lot of firepower! I bought it from some guy named Captain Black. I'm kind of new at being a pirate and all, so I might be a little choppy with the pirate language.
"So how ye be liking the ship?" Captain Black asked.
"Its awesome! I mean, Arrghh! I like it a lot!" I said embaressed.
"You don't have to sound like a pirate that much you know." He whispered to me.
"Squaaak!" That stupid old parrot which Captain Black has is SO annoying. I just wanna cut it's head off! Just then my friend, Captain Orange, came on my ship.
"Big ship Alex!"
"Please, call me Captain Blue." I demanded.
"Ok, ok, Captain Blue..."

-End of Chapter 1-

Captain Seaford 10-23-2008 11:59 PM

No replys = No chapter 2!

PirateMarioJr 10-24-2008 12:41 AM

you should make the chapters longer. It's good though

Captain Seaford 10-24-2008 01:07 AM

hehe, first chapter is always the shortest! Other chapters will be longer, hehe

Jack Sharkbane 10-29-2008 06:52 PM

sweet! cant wait to hear more!!!!


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