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Old 09-29-2008, 12:03 AM
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Chapter 4

In Jones' cave, Swash and Jones were chatting about how to get Chris.
"So how are you going to get him?" asked Swash
"I have a plan..." Jones answered. "Just give me a couple of minutes"
"Alright cap'n" said Swash. Swash left the cave. Chris was getting ready for thier trip.
"Aye! Chris! Are ye ready?" shouted Dan
"Just about!!" Chris shouted back, heading out the door. But when he went outside. Tortuga was empty. There was no one there, not even his crew.
"Hello??" Chris hollered. It made an echo. "Hello? Is anyone there? Mike? Anyone?". No one answred. He then heard a rustle in the bushes.
"What was that?" Chris was startled. He then saw a shadow behind him. It was Jones.
"Hello Chris" He said with a big smile on his face.
"Ahhh!! Someon hel..." Chris's mouth was closed by Jone's hands.
"No one can hear you..." Jones said. "It's all part of my plan". Chris tried to say something but was muffled.
"Muhaha!!" Jones laughed. Then he disappeared with Chris and everything went back to normal.
"Darn it!! What is taking him so long" Dan wondered. He went into the Tavern. "Chris? Where are you?"
"He left" said the Bartender.
"Huh? No he didn't. He's not on the ship" Dan answered.
"Hmm... then I don't know where he went" said the Bartender going back to work.
"Oh man... not again..." Dan knew exactly what happened. He ran outside to the crew.
"Did you find him?" asked Kinder.
"No, but I know where he is." said Dan.
"Where?" Kinder asked
"Jones..." Dan said.
"Wait...What?" Kinder said confused. Dan ran to Mike.
"Captain! Jones kidnapped Chris!!" Dan yelled running into the captain's quarters. Mike stopped what he was doing and looked at Dan.
"What do you mean?" asked the Captain. Kinder then came in to know more.
"You know that power he has to make everything disppear except for one thing he wants?" asked Dan.
"Yeah..." Both Mike and Kinder said.
"Well... That's exactly what happened." Dan said.
"Not again..." Mike said.
"What should we do?" asked Kinder.
"What we did last time when we saved Dan..." Mike said.
"Oh yeah... I forgot that happened to me" answered Dan.

Chapter 5 coming soon!
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Old 09-29-2008, 12:11 AM
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Old 09-29-2008, 12:18 AM
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get yer filthy hands off me jones!
Haha! We'll have to see about that
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Old 09-29-2008, 12:42 AM
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Old 10-04-2008, 11:16 PM
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Old 10-10-2008, 11:58 PM
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Here is the next Chapter!!

Chapter 5

Jones put Chris in a cage.
"Now that I have you, I can make you join our army and help us rule these islands again!!!" Jones said loudly.
"You'll never make me do your dirty work Jones" Chris said angerily.
"We'll have to see about that..." Jones said. "Swash! Watch him!!". Jones left for a couple of minutes.
"You are a traitor..." Chris said.
"I've always been, Chris" answered Swash. "for five years!!"
"Why did you join the crew anyway?" asked Chris.
"My mission was to make sure you get in. I'm the one who asked Mike to let you in." answered Swash.
"Why you little....!!" Chris was about to call him a nasty name.
"Nuh uh uh...." Swash interupted. "We don't want to call each other nasty names, do we?. Mike gave Swash a dirty look.
"Here, wear this neckalace" Swash commanded.
"No" Chris said.
"What?" Swash looked at him.
"I said no..." repeated Chris. Swash took out his pistol.
"Put it on or die..." Swash said. Chris didn't like the choices Swash gave him, so he put up on putting on the neckalce. Chris than fainted. Swash smirked a bit.
"Excellent..." Swash said to himself. Jones came in
"Did he put it on?" asked Jones.
"Yup... he should wake up soon" Swash answered.
"Excellent..." Jones smiled evily. Chris woke up.
"Ugh..." Chris moaned. "Jones... let me out". Swash opened the cage and Chris got out.
"The power... your power is to rise the dead and make them our army and you can give commands." Jones said. "Here are your weapons". Jones handed him a sword, a pistol, a voodoo doll, grenades, and a staff.
"Tonight, we begin Operation: Take over Islands!!!" Jones yelled loudly. they all cheered/
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Old 10-11-2008, 01:35 PM
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Bump! Next chapter!

Chapter 6

Mike went to the graveyard.
"Rise Skeletons!!" yelled Chris. The graveyard keeper saw him.
"Hey kid! Stop!" yelled the guy. Mike just looked at him.
"Did you hear me kid?" the guy asked.
"Skeletons... ATTACK!!!" yelled Chris. The guy ran screaming. One of the skeletons blocked his way.
"Going somewhere?" the skeleton asked. The guy stopped dead, looking at the skeleton. The skeleton choked the guy and he fell to the ground dead. They left before someone else saw them.

The next morning, the pirates got together and talked about how to get Chris back.
"Maybe we can do the same thing that Jones did." Kinder asked.
"No, too risky." answered Mike. Just then a soldier came in.
"Pirates, I need you to see something" said the soldier.
"Umm... ok" said Mike. The pirates went with him to the graveyard. When they got there, they were surprised to have seen what has happened. The graves were dug up and there was the grave keeper there on the ground, dead.
"Who could've done this?" asked Mike.
"I don't know, we suspect it was Jones." answered the soldier. Mike an the soldier kept talking. Dan went over to a grave.
"Hey Kinder! Come here!" Dan yelled, signalling Kinder. Kinder ran over.
"Yeah? What's up?" asked Kinder.
"Isn't that your father?" Dan said suspiously. Kinder looked at it blankly.
"Yeah..." Kinder said quietly. Here is what it said.

Here Lies Steve Kinder
1967-1920
A great pirate who faught in the Pirate Revlutionary. Unforunatly, he died in the war when his baby son was born.

"I am going to get that sick loser" Kinder sweared. "I swear..."
"So, is it too late to get Chris back, capn'?" asked James.
"No, he may be on the bad side now but we will get him back" Mike said. Kinder was mad on the way back to the ship.
"Dan, what's wrong with Kinder?" asked James.
"Chris rose the dead, it also included his father." Dan explained.
"What?" James was surprised.
"He swore revenge on Jones to get his father back" Dan explained again.
"That's just not right..." James said. All of a sudden, there was a boom.
Back on the island where they just were, there was a big boom.
"I'm baaack!!!" said Jones. The crew crew looked over to the island. Luckily they weren't far away.

Next Chapter is when the battle begins....
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Old 10-18-2008, 10:28 PM
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Old 10-22-2008, 01:48 AM
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This...is...the...FINAL CHAPTER!!!

Chapter 7

The pirates rushed to the island. When they arrived there, the island was already half destroyed. The buildings were all burnt down. Some soldiers lying on the ground ground dead, and some innocent villagers.
"This needs to be stopped" said Mike.
"Definately" agreed Kinder.
"Dan!!" Mike called over Dan. Dan ran over to him.
"Aye captain?" asked Dan.
"Go find Chris before things get worse" said Mike. Dan nodded and ran off to find Chris.
"Captain... I'll be right back" Kinder said.
"Alright" said Mike. On some other part of the island, Chris was about to kill someone.
"Get ready to say goodbye to your life..." Chris said.
"N-n-no..." the man said. "Pl-pl-please don't!!". All of a sudden, The man disappeared.
"Whoa.. where did he go?" Chris said. Then, Chris found himself flying through the air. He then hit a building. The man that Chris held hostage walked up to him.
"Thought you can get rid of me life huh?" asked the man.
"W-who are y-you?" Chris said. He was scared.
"Your worst nightmare" the man said. It was dark so Chris couldn't really see his face. The man took out his voodoo doll and made Chris go fly up the air. Chris just stayed in the air.
"Now..." the man began. "If you don't go back to the good side then you die... if you do, you stay alive". Then the man dropped Chris to the ground and then left. Chris didn't move. Kinderwent to look around the damage. Without knowing, his undead father snuck up behind him and attacked him.
"You'll now die!!" yelled Steve Kinder. Kinder just blocked him.
'Dad!! It's me.. Kinder, your son!!" Kinder yelled.
"You're probably just a fake!!" His father yelled.
"No!! It's really me!! Your wife's name is Mary" Kinder yelled. Steve just dropped everything.
"You really are him... I left before you were born..." said Steve. Kinder smiled a bit. They sat down and talked. On the other side of the island, Dan found Chris.
"Chris..." Dan ran over to him. Dan grabbed Chris' arm. "you need to snap out of this. Chris pulled his arm away from Dan.
"Let go of me!!" Chris yelled. Chris slapped Dan.
"You don't know what you are doing!!" yelled Dan.
"Yes I do!!" disagreed Chris.
"No you don't!!" Dan yelled again. Chris wasn't paying attention. He then disappeared. Back with Mike and the rest of the pirates.
"Well...well...well... lookee at what we have here" Jones said going up to them. "The itty bitty pirates. You guys can't beat me and my army."
"Oh yeah... let the battle begin...." said Mike. They both took out their swords. Mike then appeared. Dan joined. Kinder and his father then came. Mike and Jone fought. The undead were fighting the other pirates.
"Chris and Swash... Help!!!" Jones yelled when he realized Mike was too strong. They both joined him.
"Get ready to die Mike!!!" Chris yelled. He stabbed Mike with his sword. Mike fell down.
"No!!" Dan and nKinder yelled running over to try and help Mike.
"Good job Chris!!" Jones said. Chris' evil ways were wearing off.
"What have I done?" Chris said to himself quietly. He ran off.
"Now it's time for Kinder and Dan..." Jones said. Jones was about to go to Kinder.
"Get away from my son..." Steve said. He then threw a dagger and it hit Jones right in the chest. He fell down dead. Swash and the rest of the army disppeared.
"Dan... Kinder..." Mike said quietly. "It's your job to take over the crew...".
"No... captain" said Kinder. "We're not ready..."
"Yes you guys are..." said Mike. Those were his last words. Kinder and Dan Carried Mike's body on to the ship. They threw him into the water. James was mad at Chris for killing their captainb. He decided that they shouldn't be friends any more. On Jones' Island, Swash was happy.
"It's now my turn!!!" he yelled. They all cheered.

To Be Continued....

I hope you liked this part. The next Part will be up soon....
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Old 10-23-2008, 12:37 AM
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Old 10-23-2008, 12:51 AM
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Wow! As soon as i saw this thread i just couldn't stop reading the story! Best dang one on the site, the very! Can't wait for the next bit o the story!
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Old 10-23-2008, 01:18 AM
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I hope to put the next part soon

I can't decide if I should either put up the 2nd part now or later...
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