Jason Shorewrecker's story

[jl102pond]

My story about my pirate so far....

Inculding some members of El Looters


Chapter 1

Thrown away


"Hey mate what they put you in here for?" a voice says in my head. THUD. I am tossed against the wall. I open my eyes and see an odd looking man holding me against the wall. " I killed a navy officer and got surrounded by dragoons, who put me in here" I say simply. The odd man seems familiar looking, but I can't put my tongue on it. " I know you" he says pausing for a moment. "Your names Jason Shorewrecker." " Aye you got that right" I say " but I don't think I know you."






Chapter 2

Good Fella and Sidewinder


"How don't ye remember your Captain Good Fella" I suddenly drop to my knees and Good Fella gasps. "What" I say. But I don't need an answer. Blood is dripping from the back of my head. " Bloody jailers must have done that to you" Good says. I kick at the jail cell door and it opens. "Quick grab my effects" I yell. Good grabs my effects and I pull out a old looking dagger and put it to the back of my head. Green light bursts out of the dagger and heals the wound. " This is Sidewinder, my famed dagger" I say.







Chapter 3

Remember Cinder

Good Fella and I ran from the jail. Suddenly there was a sword at my throat. "Who's this" a hooded lady asks Good. "Jason Shorewrecker you remember Cinder Lovely" "Hello Cinder," I say. "Jason?" she gasps "I thought you were dead, now I owe Johnny fifty gold coins." "What" I say "He's the reason I did not make it. He shot a keg of gun powder behind me and I would have nearly burned to death if it weren't for .... for.... I don't know what.

[Ofury/ Tom]

Your chapters are quite short mate. Other than that great job! It was fun to read!

[Captain Sharktooth]

Good story, start a new line every time there is a new speaker or else it becomes hard to follow. Also, you need to make the Chapters longer...

[Captain Sharktooth]

Originally Posted by Captain Sharktooth

Good story, start a new line every time there is a new speaker or else it becomes hard to follow. Also, you need to make the Chapters longer...

Coming along nicely but ^^^^^Same thing I said before

[jl102pond]

Thank you for your comments. I hope this chapter is better

Chapter 4

The Odd Brew


Cinder, Good and I ran out of the fort and across the path. We get to my ship the Scarlet Sabre, which is miraculously still mourned to the dock. I go in to my cabin and a voice says "Drink the magic brew it will help remember you the fate of that night." I spin around and there is a small red bottle right on the floor. I pick it up and drink some. I begin to see the night of the escape from the EITC Armory. "You were betrayed by him. He left you to die. But I saved you'" the voice says. " Mother," I yell "No it cant be you." A blue hand reaches out and touches my face. " Yes it is my son."