The Kraken's Tentacles

[Bart Swordslipper]

An eight year old girl, Kat Fee, tells her tale about her life in the Caribbean. As she grows older, her fears grow stronger. She learns why her parents gave her up, she grows a strong hatred for a certain group, the navy, EITC, or the evil group of Jolly Roger.





Chapter One
Stranded



I was a little girl when my parents left me, alone. I was marooned on the deserted island of Devil's Anvil. My parents kept my twin brother, Felix. They will always protect him. I am happy though they kept him. He is frailer than I. I can live by myself, I did it when I was younger. My parents left the house. I had been alone. I bought food from the market and cooked. It was a hard day of work. Now, I don't know if I can. I have to fight for my food. There is not a market on Devil's Anvil, it's deserted as I mentioned before.

I will be eating scorpions for the rest of my life, practically sitting there, waiting for my death to come. All the shade I found was under the trees, it didn't offer much though. You had to be hugging the trunk to be sitting completely in shade. If I see any ships, I'll be jumping at them. I want off these islands. All I remember from before I was marooned was that my father said "Never talk to those Navy slime bags, they will kill ye."

Last night, he said he loved me, but today, I am here. I walked around the barren island. Many large scorpions following me. They seemed carnivorous, but I wasn't going to test that theory. My leather boots protected from my feet to my knee, my skirt didn't protect much though, If I fell asleep, I'd be sure to die. I put my tricorn hat on to block some of the shade. It worked a little bit, but not much. As I was walking, I noticed a small handle on a rock. The rock was actually a boulder, it was about the size of a royal mansion. It was the rock which caused the name for the island. I walked towards the handle, it was a perfect shape. I slid my hand in the concaved area and pulled. As I did that, a rock fell to the sand to the right of me. I looked where it could have fallen from. A nice machine was there, A boulder, the size of a cake, was tied to one end. That end was descending. As it started descending, the boulder before me slid a small door open.

The door was about the size of a dog door. I crawled in. About ten feet in the distance, the small entrance opened to a nice small room. The room was made for a pirate. I looked around. I heard the door shut automatically. I suddenly panicked , was I locked in? In candlelight, I saw another machine, this was the same as outside, I could escape. I heard a thud around the room.

"Who are ye?" a voice whispered. It was a woman's voice. The woman peered up from under the table. The woman looked strong and beautiful at the same time. She had black flowing hair that light up in the candlelight.

"My name is Kat Fee, who are you?" I asked, almost regretting I gave my name out.

"The name is Captain Ven. May I ask, why are you here, your just a little girl."


TO BE CONTINUED

[KeeperOfTheCode]

Short choppy sentences will be your doom. Try to combine or add. And... try to be more descriptive.

[Bart Swordslipper]

Aye sorry, I will be working on that, I was in a rush cause I had to go.




I changed the plot, didn't like the old one.