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Old 09-23-2008, 01:18 AM
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Pirate Islands: Part 1

Pirate Islands

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Chris- A new pirate who is still getting the hang of things. The thing is, the Dark Pirates want him on his side because he has a certain power that can help them take over the Pirate Islands. Chris doesn’t believe he doesn’t have the power yet, but as soon as he does, everything goes wild

James- Chris’ best friend. They have been friends since they were five years old. James became a pirate when he was eight years old. Now he is fifteen. He has been fighting the Dark Pirates ever since he joined them. Unfortunately, things between James and Chris are beginning not to go so well

Kinder- He has been a pirate for years now and still enjoys it. He is also Chris’ Master. Kinder has to keep a good look out for his crew. He is also the assistant captain

Captain Mike- The head Captain of the crew. The crew’s name is called the Adventurers. He was part of the Dark Pirates, but he went to the good pirates’ side.

… More will be introduced in the story


Dark Pirates:

Captain Jones- The meanest pirate in the Pirate Islands. He has always wanted to take over the Pirate Islands but was always unsuccessful. He was unsuccessful, until now. His objective right now is to kidnap Chris and turn him in a Dark Pirate. But will he succeed?

…More will be introduced in the story


*I did ask for permission first before I posted this story, this will have pistols and people will die. I thought I would tell you be fore you guys start saying this is against therules

Chapter 1 coming soon
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Old 09-23-2008, 01:26 AM
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Interesting im gonna love this story! I'm in it! Lol cant wait for Chapter 1!
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Old 09-23-2008, 01:31 AM
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Nice it sounds interesting!
Keep writing!
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Old 09-23-2008, 01:48 AM
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Here it is:

Chapter 1

"Boom! Boom!" thunder went. There was a meeting going on in the Tortuga Inn.
"Ok, I want you to introduce you to a new member to the crew." Captain Mike began. "His name's Chris".
Out came a short boy with brown hair.
"H-Hello" he said nervously. "My n-name is Chris"
"Hello Chris" said the crew.
"Thanks to James, he knows Chris. He invited him to this crew and I want you all to be nice to him." said Mike. "He is only fourteen". After the meeting, they all left except for Kinder, Mike , and Chris
"Kinder, can I talk to you?" asked Mike
"Sure" answered Kinder.
"I want to you to train Chris. Get him to understand the basics of being a pirate and after the basics are done, teach him the hard stuff" said Mike
"Yes captain" said Kinder agreeing. They all left. But somewhere else, a dark pirate was.
"Grr..." He growled. His name is Captain Jones. "Oh, how I hate those pirates. I wanted that boy". One of his soldiers cam in. It was his best soldier, Ben.
"Sir, are you sure you want him?" asked Ben. "I mean he's only fourteen".
"I told you once before, he has the power I want" stated Jones. "The Power I need to take over the Islands". He began to laught. "Muahaha!"

Chapter 2 coming soon...
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Old 09-23-2008, 10:07 PM
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Old 09-23-2008, 10:08 PM
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Thx I love Stories Like This.
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Old 09-23-2008, 11:30 PM
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Here is Chapter two!!

Chapter 2

It was early in the morning. Both Kinder and Chris got up and went to the training shack on Tortuga.
"All right, ready to start your training?" asked Kinder
"Yeah, I guess..." answered Chris.
"We are going to begin with the basics" said Kinder handing him a sword.
"What do I do with this?" asked Kinder
"Destroy those practice dummies" said Kinder. Chris went over and started to fight the dummies.
"Good" said Kinder. "Now, let's move on". They finished up the training and met the rest of the crew outside the shack.
"I want you to meet another pirate." said Mike when they came out. Out came a man with an eye patch over his right eye. "This is Swash"
"Ahoy Chris!" said Swash.
"Ahoy." Chris said. They went aboard the ship.
"Hey man, how was training?" asked James to Chris.
"I wasn't that bad." answered Chris.
"That's good, but being a pirate isn't easy, it's hard work, trust me." said James.
"I can tell." said Chris.
"Kinder," Mike called.
"Yes, cap'n?" Kinder said coming over.
"When do you think it would be the best time to tell him about Jones?" asked Mike.
"Probably when we arrive to Padres." answered Kinder
"Yeah," agreed Mike. "I'll have Swash tell him about Jones"
"He is a good sory teller" said Kinder. Later, they arrived to Padres. They went into the inn.
"Swash," said Mike. Swash nodded. He knew what it meant. He went over to Chris.
"Chris, I need to tell you a story about an evil pirate." said Swash. "You need to know this. It won't take long".
"Umm... alright" said Chris.
"Ahem... Long ago, an evil pirate named Jones ruled the Islands long before us good pirates came." started Swash. "He destroyed all things good. He killed many citizens that lived, but also put some into slavery. But one day, he lost that power. That was when us pirates came. We told the citzens of the Islands to stay calm and that we are going to do the best we can to stop this nonsense. Jones then dissappeared. No one knows. Now, in order for him to rule these Islands again, He has to have someone with a certain power".
"Stop right there Swash" commanded Mike.
"He has the right to know" said Swash
"The right to know what?" asked Chris getting anxious.
"He will find out" Mike said starting to get angry.
"When? When he's a level two pirate?" asked Swash.
"Probably" answered Mike
"I think he should be warned in advance!!" yelled Swash.
"He'll find out!" yelled MIke
"Can someone please tell me what's going on?!?" asked Mike loudly. All of a sudden, there was a loud bang.
"Where is Chris?!" yelled Jones

Chapter 3 coming soon
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Old 09-24-2008, 12:04 AM
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Yay awesome story!
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Old 09-24-2008, 12:12 AM
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Old 09-24-2008, 12:14 AM
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Lol Chris but I be a Good story teller The Pen is mightier than the sword.
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The story is great! Nice work putting it together!
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Old 09-24-2008, 12:38 AM
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Thanks for the great comments but chapter isn't over yet. I need to put in a bit more

Edit: Chapter 2 is now finished!! Keep checking soon for Chapter 3
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Awesome...I'm on the edge of my seat...Could this be a portent of things to come on POC?? Beware all ye pirates...and guild any pirate by the name of Chris before he falls for the "Dark Side" and turns his powers against us all! We are all of the Brotherhood...and must look out for the pirate way...AYE???
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Chapter 3

"Why do you want to know?" asked Mike.
"I want him on my side!!" Jones yelled
"Well you can't have him!" Mike yelled back.
"He has the power I want!!" Jones said getting really angry.
"What is with this power?!?" Chris yelled. "Oops!"
"There you are Chris..." Jones said going up to him.
"Get away from him" Mike said angerily. Jones looked at him, picked him up and threw Mike in the air.
"Captain!!" Kinder yelled running up to him.
"Ugh... My head" Mike moaned. "Make sure Jones doesn't take him..."
"Now, where was I? Ah... yes, you're coming with me Chris" Jones said. All of a sudden, bees swarmed Jones.
"Ahh!" He yelled madly.
"Leave him alone..." someone said. It was another pirate named Dan
"Well, well, well, look who's here" Jones said laughing. "Dan McHenson". Dan gave Jones a dirty look.
"I said let him go." Dan said again
"I don't think so" Jones said. Dan took out a voodoo doll and threw it. Jones just stood there.
"That was lame..." Jones said laughing. "Now if you'll excuse me... Chris and I have thing to do". Then, there was a gunshot. It hit Jones then he disappeared. James shot it.
"Where did he do?" Chris asked. "Is he dead?"
"No... He just went back to his cave." James answered
"Are you ok Chris?" Dan asked.
"Yeah..." Chris said not moving. "It was scary though"
"It always is." answered James. They went to the ship. Mike was still hurt.
"Um guys... I will be right back" Swash said. "I forgot something at the inn"
"Alright," said Kinder. Swash left. He teleported to the place where Jones is hidden.
"You will get him sir" Swash said
"I better..." Jones answered.


Look for Chapter 4 coming soon... It may come today or it may not
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