The hidden

[Roger Sharkshot]

Awesome I like explosion you should get more attention because you are a really good writer.

[The Sharpshooter]

Originally Posted by Roger Sharkshot

Awesome I like explosion you should get more attention because you are a really good writer.

Really? Thanks.

[Mr. Skiperdoo]

Just a thought... When are you updating?

[The Sharpshooter]

Originally Posted by Mr. Skiperdoo

Just a thought... When are you updating?

My goal is to get a chapter out every week, so probably another one tomorrow or the day after.

[Rose Calicofoote]

Nice story, matey! I may be a newbie on the forums but I do love reading and writing!

[The Sharpshooter]

Sorry guys, but action scenes are just NOT my thing. I seriously stink at 'em. Chapters should come out more often after this scene. Also cause school and homework get in the way too. Mostly the first reason though.

[Roger Sharkshot]

Originally Posted by The Sharpshooter

Sorry guys, but action scenes are just NOT my thing. I seriously stink at 'em. Chapters should come out more often after this scene. Also cause school and homework get in the way too. Mostly the first reason though.

Oh its fine mate like the story so far though

[The Sharpshooter]

I love how this isn't archived yet, I plan to get chapters out more often. I started this, so I plan to see it through. Expect more chapters soon!

[The Sharpshooter]

Sorry for double post, but just finished the belated chapter. xD This is the old one, new one's i the OP.

Chapter 2
Playing with explosives
After lugging all four crates of beer to the bar, Roger and Stealth were exhausted.

“*huff* So, *huff* why do we *huff* always *huff* bring the *huff* beer here? *huff*” Stealthy asked. Roger caught his breath, then replied:

“Because if we didn’t there would be no more beer left after you get there.” Roger said rolling his eyes.

“Oh yeah.” Stealthy said with a lack of bashfulness. Then he looked shocked and horrified. He turned to Roger and asked:

“Hey, am I drunk or-”

“Drunk.” Roger said, not really paying attention. Stealthy narrowed his eyes at Roger, and turned his head to the sea.

“Look there and tell me you don’t see Jolly Roger’s ship.”

“I don’t see Jolly Roger’s ship.”

“Uh.... maybe I AM drunk.”

“No, I see it, I was just following orders.” Roger got a punch for that one.

“But, why is he here?” Roger asked, paying full attention now. If this an invasion they were toast, only them and one other person was there.

“Yeah, ask the beer addict something a regular person can’t figure out, that makes sense.” Stealthy said sarcastically. I almost prefer you crazy over beer then this. Roger thought to himself. Then, the drawbridge of the ship lowered, and out walked Jolly himself. OK, this is definitely not an invasion. What the heck is going on? Jolly stepped off, and narrowed his eyes at Roger, and started walking toward the bar.

“Come on! We shall protect the beer at all costs!” Stealth said, dragging Roger toward Jolly. Not very stealthy, are you?

“Move pirates, I’ll collect your souls soon enough.” Jolly commanded.

“You. No hurt beer. Leave now.”

“Mates, I’ll be destroying that bar wether you get in my way or not.” Jolly replied as he waved his hand.

“No!” Too late, the bar exploded behind them.

“Wow, dude, I like explosions too, but thats a little overboard!” The random pirate said.

“All that beer....... gone.” Stealthy said. “YOU MONSTER!!!!!” How is he mad about the beer but NOT about the people? Stealthy took out his blunderbuss, the random pirate held a Firebomb in each hand, and Roger drew Thunderspine.

“I did not come to treat with worms” Jolly said. Winds wrapped around him, and he was gone, his ship with him. Roger started to head for his own boat, when out of the ground came a pirate, someone Roger had never seen before.

“Who are you?” Roger asked.

“That.... is none of your concern.” The pirate replied with an evil grin. Roger decided it was best to be cautious, and pointed Thunderspine at the pirate.

“Aw what a pity, and here I thought we could be friends” The pirate sighed. Roger didn’t respond, didn’t even blink.

“Alright then, don’t say I didn’t warn you.” The pirate drew a blood red sword, and launched himself at Roger.

[The Sharpshooter]

Writing this and the next chapter at the same time. xD Please post and criticize, unless it has something to do with the unbalanced post rate, in which case, I know. It's annoying. I say I'll post it in a week, it gets posted in a month or two. Bye peoples!

~Sharp

[The Sharpshooter]

New chappie going to be posted in a few seconds, here's the old one.


Chapter 3
The extremely belated fight scene
The evil pirate jumped up with sword in hand, planning to flatten Roger into the ground. He dodged, then countered with a jab. The enemy deflected it, swept roger off his feet, and kicked him into a wall. Then he just walked slowly, taking his time, knowing Roger couldn’t do anything but lie on the ground. Uhm, guys, saving me right about now would be really great....... As if he could hear Roger, the unknown pirate hurled Firebombs, Smoke bombs, and regular bombs at the enemy, setting him on fire and blinding him, while Stealthy shot multiple loads using Quick Shot. Why does he not look hurt? Roger wondered. For a good reason, too. Despite all the effort put into hurting him, then enemy was barely scratched. Kind of like jumping off a cliff and the only damage done is a paper cut size cut on your back. Roger picked himself up, and decided that brute force wouldn’t work, so he drew a saber in place of Thunderspine. Stealthy, thinking the same thing, traded his blunderbuss for dual pistols.
“Guess I’ll have to change, too.” The bomber sad kind of sadly. He packed his bombs and instead took out a voodoo doll. He attuned Roger and Stealthy, and stood back and let them do the fighting while he healed them. Using this strategy, the trio was eventually able to wear the enemy down. He collapsed in exhaustion, panting.
“You’ve brought this on yourselves, time to stop playing.” He muttered, and he got up, raised his sword, and plunged it into the ground. Moments later, Roger could feel his life draining, the strength that made him defeat the enemy, all gone. The other two felt similar effects. How did he manage to do that? It’s almost as if....... he used the Life Drain skill! This final thought filled Roger with dread, and he looked horror stricken. The pirate just smiled.
“You get it now, don’t you?” The pirate asked rhetorically, malice in his eyes.
“Time for a little fun.” and suddenly the trio was on fire, cursed, blinded, they had just about every negative status effect on them. Then, they were attacked by what felt like millions of bees. With the final thought: I wonder why this guy doesn’t have a girlfriend...... Roger was knocked unconscious.

[The Sharpshooter]

Quadruple post... o.o' Sorry. But I want SOME comments. xD Someone please post so I'm not just writing this for me and this wall over here.