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I love the characters you have in this story. Quite realistic for the time period. Brutal and uncaring. Obsessed with their image. I love how John just sticks out. He's the different one, the underdog you could say. Although with every chapter he changes just a little bit, slowly rising, and inevitably he will be at the top.
Continue writing, I am curious as to what John will become. |
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