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02-17-2011, 11:41 PM

Pirate Guy Pirate Guy is offline

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Nice start good action

. But, comments : 1. Out of respect for your self you should captitalize your own name. 2. The name of a Ship should be underlined and first letters capitalized. 3. minor spelling errors.

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