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The Black Sail Issue #2
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02-16-2010, 02:58 AM
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An excellent job done, Mark! Just a few suggestions; in the "Top News with Mark Bladeflint," try to seperate it in to longer, more indepth paragraphs based on topic, so it seems less choppy and more organized. Other than that, great job!
P.S. And to answer your survey, I would prefer the rum ;D |
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