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12-02-2010, 09:35 PM
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I seriously love how you have developed each character to be individuals
Each one is so strong & it shows how much you have put yourself into each of them (excuse the cheesiness here) It is magic how you write their discovery of their special talents & skills It really pulls the readers in & builds a bond with the characters  How I can't wait to read more, & yet dread it because it brings me that much closer to the final chaptersKeep up the excellent writing!  |
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