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03-08-2011, 01:25 AM
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The power of the undead
Oohh, ominous title. >:-) Me likey. Anywho, I'm gonna take a shot at making a story. So, this is basically a story about a person
 . Thats all I can say for now, here's the epilogue: -Two Years Earlier- "It's over, Jolly. Just go back to your grave." "I... I wont be defeated by swine like you!" Jolly Roger said grasping his chest. "I'll take you all with me!" He yelled, unleashing various purple energy blasts. Most missed, but one caught a pirate straight in the heart. He flew back, crashing into a stone wall. "I'll see you all in the Underworld! Hahaha, HAHAHA!!!!!!" Jolly said as he disappeared, laughing like a maniac. "Will! Will, are you OK?!? WILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Chapter 4 Saved! Roger woke up with a huge headache. He also woke up screaming, but that has nothing to do with the headache. The main cause of his headache was the fact that he just lost with two other people to one pirate. His pride was kinda injured. But enough about that, the fact, and the surprising fact, is he wasn’t dead after all of that voodoo stuff. “AH! Don’t sting me anymore, I’m allergic!” Roger screamed. A pirate was looking at him. “Uh, what? Why would I......” His voice trailed off. “Where am I?” Roger asked, quickly changing the subject. “Devils Anvil.” He said simply. Silence followed, while Roger waited for more explanation. “Okay, if you’re not going to just tell me I’ll ask. WHY.” Roger said, emphasizing the last word. “Why what?” “Why am I here?” “I don’t know.” “You don’t know.” “No, that’s why I said ‘I don’t know’” “Okay, why are you here?” “My hideout.” “Hideout?” “You ask a lot of questions, you know that?” The pirate said, clearly annoyed. He was wearing a brown pirate hat, and a worn down brown coat with equally worn down black pants. He sent off a vibe of poor, yet he didn’t look skinny, which is normally associated with being poor. “Wait, where’s Stealthy? And that weird pirate that blew everything up?” Roger asked, suddenly standing up. “Uh, who?” “My best friend and some random pirate were fighting this other pirate, he had this weird looking sword and could control voodoo and.... OW! Why can’t I remember anything?” Roger asked. “Again, I don’t know. I found you washed up on the shore. I’m fairly certain someone left you there, considering you’d drown if you floated from anywhere to here. It’s practically isolated from everywhere else.” “Okay, before I go on, who are you exactly?” Roger asked, confused. “I’m The Sharpshooter. And ironically, I can’t hit the broad side of a rock with a gun. Knives are more my thing.” The Sharpshooter said. “Who are you?” “I’m Roger, Roger Swordshot. So, The Sharpshooter-” Roger started, but was interrupted. “Call me Sharp, it saves time.” Sharp said. “Okay, Sharp, where’s the nearest ship?” Roger asked, eager to look for Stealthy. “Oh no, you’re not going alone. I’m coming with you.” Sharp said. “And why should I take you with me?” Roger asked, not exactly trusting this new person. “Correction, I’m taking you on my ship, because, unlike most pirates, I actually have a conscience. Granted, it can be annoying at times, but at least I didn’t shove you in a cave with some crabs.” Sharp said matter-of-factly. “Fine, let’s head out.” Roger said, heading for the dock. “Wait, take this.” Sharp said, tossing Roger his Thunderspine sword. “Where did you.....?” Roger said as he caught it. “It was on you when I found you. I tried using it to make some thunder, but for some reason it didn’t work for me.” Sharp said shrugging. “Anyway, let’s get going.” Sharp and Roger went toward the dock, and boarded Sharp’s ship, the Silver Rouge. Sign ups are open! I need more people! Thanks. Pirate Name: (I.e. Swash cyber shot) Pirate Notoriety: Favorite Weapon (Includes Sailing and cannon.): Fav Weapon Lvl: Personality: Good or Evil?: Other: NOTE: When I say favorite "weapon" I mean generally. Like "Sword" or "Voodoo Doll" Characters: Pirate: Stealthy Cannoneer/Stealth Level: 41 Weapon: Blunderbuss Weapon Level: 28 Personality: Crazy/Drunk Pirate name? Roger Swordshot level: 50 Weapon: Sword weapon level(s): Maxxed Personality: loves to fight, also a good leader. Pirate Name:Roger Sharkshot Pirate Notoriety: 46 Favorite Weapon: Grenade,Sword Fav Weapon Lvl:25,30 Personality:Grenades go BOOM yay a.k.a. likes explosive and is awesome Good or Evil?: good Pirate Name:Mr. Awesome. Pirate Notoriety: 32 Favorite Weapon: voodoo doll. Fav Weapon Lvl:25 Personality:Corrupt and twisted Good or Evil?: Evil. (I need at least ONE evil person. xD) If you wanna be a kinda major character, wait till someone picks your fav weapon then pick it please. If you wanna be a MAJOR major character, act fast cause it's first come first serve I'd appreciate it if you actually READ the story before signing up, but I can't actually stop you from signing up, seeing as I couldn't really tell the difference. And please leave comments, suggestions, criticism, etc. Last edited by The Sharpshooter; 12-24-2011 at 06:18 AM.. Reason: New Chappie. :D |
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03-08-2011, 05:02 AM
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Good start mate! I would makes the chapters longer, but if you are making a short story, I guess not too long then. Also, you should make a space between each line, just so people can see it better and it comes out neater.
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03-08-2011, 10:12 PM
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03-08-2011, 10:34 PM
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Here ya go:
Pirate: Stealthly Cannoneer/Stealth Level: 41 Weapon: Blunderbuss Weapon Level: 28 Personality: Crazy/Drunk |
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03-08-2011, 10:37 PM
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Thanks.
 I'll need at least one more person before the next chapter though. I'm pretty happy though, one sign up in two days is pretty good, I think.
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03-08-2011, 10:42 PM
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03-09-2011, 01:09 AM
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There is actually a weapon thats a combo of a pistol and sword. just looks like a sword, with a pistol attached on the hilt, and the barrel faces the same way the blade does. would fit my name perfectly! but do what ever ye want
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03-09-2011, 02:38 AM
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03-10-2011, 02:48 AM
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03-10-2011, 03:06 AM
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BTW Sharp...... Good... If you read The Lost Phantom, I kinda want to be like Witchdoctor Dan, but more crazy.
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03-10-2011, 03:12 AM
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03-10-2011, 03:14 AM
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Its on The Sailor's Yarn Sharp...
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03-10-2011, 03:18 AM
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The hidden
Linear Mode
