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Old 09-08-2011, 12:42 AM
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The Dark Age

Ok so before you comment plz go easy on me this is my first story and to learn more about these main characters go to my user page. Enjoy
Prologue
Jolly roger's Ship
9/7/1721
1:35 am

"Ok lets do this" said one of the crew members

"Not yet we need the signal" said chris Warskull

Then a big ship called the Siren Queen had came up close to the ship. Then a big flash of green had flashed up in the sky.

"ok now go go go!" said chris

A crew of 20 crew men had jumped of Jolly's ship and had swam to the other ship and sailed away laughing.But they were foolish to think they would get away that easy. After they had sailed away a hugh fog had eaten the ship. Then behind them they saw jolly's ship coming closer to them. They knew that they had been spotted. No matter how fast they were going jolly just keep getting closer. They had to fight him but they knew they would lose. But then the sun had come up and jolly had let them go. Jolly's ship had stoped, the fog had lifted, and jolly was not anywhere in sight.

"set sail for tortuga we need more pirates if we want to be free from Jolly forever" Chris commanded.

So as they were heading towards tortuga they had passed a mercant ship and of course because of them being pirates. They had destroyed and looted the ship. The survivors were cursed into undead crew members and served chris. One of the new crew members was a man named Tim Truesilver. But little does chris know that capturing Tim was bad idea.
It had turned out that the wife of Tim name Cat truesilver who was a good freind of a powerful pirate named Johnny darkwalker. When she had found out that Tim had been kidnapped cat had went to johnny and told him of the news. But before she could she has to find a way to tortuga.

During this time Johnny is speaking to a powerful freind named Tiberius fireskull who had sailied with his father.

"Tub i seem to be in need of a crew and i am going to raven's cove to colect a ghost crew and i need your help to control them"

"johnny you are a mad man to try and control those ghost they will kill you easly"

" i know they can but i have found a way to control them"

" How and besides with the rage ghosts you will never get in "

"dont worry i have a plan for those rage ghosts"

" the real problem is seeing if the ghosts will trust us enough to go with us and be in the crew"

" oh i see you will try to trick them into the crew"

"aye "

"so will you help me"

"aye i will but their better be some rum in it for me"

"Aye there will"

Then johnny had went and got his ship captains Roger Swordshot, Captain Sharktooth, and Mr.awesome to set out for ravens cove. But they were worried about if Johnny had gone crazy.

"I am a bit worried about johnny i think he has finally lost it" said Captian sharktooth

"Me too but it might just be that his anger for jolly has taken control of him" said Mr.Awesome

"aye but it doesn't matter why he is crazy what matters is that he has a death wish for going to raven's cove" said Roger

"Aye and their is no way we can stop him" said sharky

"i don't think i really want to do this trip" said roger

"me either but johnny needs our help and i am ready to help him" said Mr.awesome

"well lets just set sail and get this adventure started" said sharky

"May god help us" said Roger

The captains had set sail on there ships. They all hope johnny has a good plan and they are prepared to meet there deaths.

Last edited by Johnny Darkwalker; 09-18-2011 at 03:09 AM..
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Old 09-08-2011, 01:18 AM
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Ooh, looks like you've got a good story set up, Johnny! The only thing I want to suggest is that you work on the grammar and punctuation mistakes that you made - working on quotation marks, capitalization, etc. Other than that, keep it up!
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Old 09-08-2011, 01:49 AM
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i am working on that right now and ty Del
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Old 09-10-2011, 05:23 AM
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ok so i am going to write each chapter once a week
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Old 09-10-2011, 06:05 PM
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Fun stuff Johnny!
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Old 09-18-2011, 08:23 PM
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The Dark Age

A Long Night
Raven's Cove
9/10/1721
6:21pm

It had taken them a total of three days to make it to raven's cove. They had made port and met up on the beach.

"What a sad place" said Tiberius

They had walked up a trail of dead bodies. Which led them to a destroyed building.They had entered with caution. But then they had found a ghost. They had surrounded it.

"who are you?" said the ghost

"that is not important, we need a way to find a way into El Patron's Mines and you are going to tell us how" said Johnny

"I do not know how to get into the mines, but their is a man farther down trail, and he should know how to get into the mines. But you might be too late" the ghost said with a smirk on his face.

They did not notice that the sun was going down. Then a moaning sound came from outside. They knew then that the rage ghosts were out.

"Oh no!" said Captain sharktooth

"It is ok, i have a plan for the rage ghosts, but i will need some help"

They walked out and all three rage ghosts had started to attack there crew. Johnny then started a hex to control the deadly ghosts. They ghosts started to freeze up and then they joined into the dead body of a crew member named Jack Freebones. Then at that moment Jack stood up and bows to johnny.

"My master" said jack

"what just happened" Mr.Awesome

Johnny had turned and said " I have just found a way to bound a soul into a body and control them"

"how?" said Mr.Awesome

"That is not important, what is important is that he is no longer Jack Freebones but he is now The Dark One and he is our weapon"

"What is your order my master" said The Dark One

"The is a man down the trail find him and capture him"

The Dark One had gone doen the trail with amazing speed and power. He had went all the way up the trail. Then he had found a man hiding in a crate. The man had treated The Dark One to go away. But The dark One had capture and brought the man to johnny.

"What is your name?"

"My name is Ned and what is your purpose here pirates?"

"I need a way into the mines and you are going to tell us"

"Well if it is the mines you seek you will need a key that i have hidden, it is the only way in"

"Where is it?"

"It is guarded by a powerful ghost named Foulberto Samasho, you wont stand a chance against him"

"That is what you think but we are powerful pirates"

So they had left Ned and headed for the cave of lost souls. They had entered and the cave was filled with ghosts. They had to fight of about 20 ghostly crew members till they could reach Foulberto Smasho. When they had aproached him he was a white ghost form which means he is the commander of the ghost crew here. But when a crew member of johnny's got to close a dagger had been thrown right into the crew member's chest and was killed.

"What are you doing here" Smasho shouted

"We have come for the key to El patron's mines and we are prepared to take it"

"Oh is that so, well since you are ready to take it why dont you try it" Smasho said with a smile on his face

Johnny and his crew had charged for Smasho. But Smasho had pulled out 10 dagger and threw all of them t the crew, he had killed 5 crew members. Then when johnny got close enough he had made a slash with his blade but smasho had blocked it with his dagger and had pushed him back.Then Johnny's three captains had attacked at once but it was no use. Then They all had attacked Smasho at once. But his viper nest was too strong he had killed 5 more crew mates. Johnny knew that he had to use The Dark One.

"Attack Dark One" he commanded

Then with one finally try at attacking Foulberto Smasho, they he defeted him and took the key. Then thay had ran to the entrance of the mine and unlocked the door. They were then surrounded by ghostly crew men. Then El Patron came out.

"What is your bussiness here" Said patron

"We have come before you El patron because we wish to grant you freedom from this island, but only if you help us" said johnny

"What is this offer?" said el patron

"Join my crew and sail under my command and be free forever" Johnny said

"Hmmm ok then me and my crew are now under your command" said el patron

They had then left the island with a new crew, new weapons, and new hopes

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