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Journey of the Last of the Bladebearers: Bart Gunshot's Journal
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06-24-2012, 05:49 AM
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The Fall of the Caribbean
This Story will have several POV(point of view(s))
My Major Story I will be working on... Give me advice on everything, and ect. Prologue I saw a sign on Tortuga with a couple people holding signs... It read: The End Is Near; No More Pirates!; Britain Save Us! "What is that all about," I said to the fisherman. "They want the end of the caribbean," he whispered, "Don't say your a pirate too loud, or they'll put you in jail... Spoiler for Alleigence:
Chapter 1 POV:Captain Claw It was a great sailing trip, I had everything I wanted, he waited for the officer to give him food, "Thanks Mate, this is really some good food," I let out a sigh. And it was all taken away from me. I lookee at the officer as he tries to fall asleep. Wonder if I can get out of this place, The officer coughs, "Have a good pne mate 'cause I hear if you cough right before going to sleep you'll sleep well." Or prisoners excape! The officer snores as dawn falls, I quickly grab a gun as I get out by sliding the door gently to the right, I grab the officers gun and sword, i put the sword away but I made sure there was food in there, since I took his money and spent some of it, I couldn't believe how much money he had, I can make that kind of money in a second, 3 silver dollars... I point the gun at him and thought how should i wake him up... I decided to shoot 1 bullet to the ground, he woke up instantly and muttered, "How'd you get out?" I calmly said get in that cell... As soon as i locked him up, I heard foot steps of soldiers, they heading towards to jail...I hid behind the door as they opened, as soon as the last one got out, I went out, I saw a poor old guy, he was about to be executed, his name, I couldn't remember... I gave him a gun and left... As I was running I, with curiosity went into the Tavern. There was a man dressed all in black, I knew who he was, as he was about to exit, I took my sword out to his neck and said," Would you happen to know anyone with the name of Bart, at that moment everyone in the tavern froze like water turning into ice. "No Sir!" he whispered."But you do look like him, the most average out in the seas..." I said circulating around him. I took his coat and searched it. "You probably should have the thing bart handmade, a Zombie Ring, Average, set of playing cards... What have you done to Bart! In the back of the room there was a familiar face, "I'm Bart, I sold those things to him, what do you want with me?" "Well do you you remember when Captain Claw drowned in the ocean and died?" I said, loud enough for everyone to hear. "Yes, it was tragic, after he died, we sold the ship for 72 gold" bart said excitedly.. "72 gold... I can make that in 3 minutes. Name is Clark, I am Claw's Brother." I lied, I know I'm claw but he isn't ready to hear the truth... "Claw never told us he had a brother..." "I'll be right back as I changed my coat, I heard someone barge through the door, arresting everyone... I was lucky to not be arrested... The navy is up to something... I saw a deck of playing cards, I grabbed it and put it in my pocket... I started thinking of a map of how to save my mates... Capter 2 POV: Sharkbite |
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