The Story Of Davy_ And The Impossible Bright Darkness

[Davy_Mcwrecker]

There once was a livley boy Named David. He Decided To Be Called David_ or Davy_ for short. Well One Day An E.I.T.C. Guard Came and took his mother. Then Davy_'s Father, Petre Went Out To Sea To Look for her. He nevered Returned. He Found Him self in his room with a person. He Knew This Person But Davy_ couldnt put his finger on it.... THATS IT!! Thats ........

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[Davy_Mcwrecker]

Davy_'s God Father!!! Jeremiah "Deadman" Jones. "Deadman?!?" He Asked Quickly," Why are you here? Wheres Father?" "I cannot tell you now, we must first sail to Padres Del Fuego. Deadman replied. "But....." "Dont Worry I have a ship" Deadman said while grabbing Petre's Favorite Broadsword. Today I show you how to be a Pirate!

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[Davy_Mcwrecker]

"A Pirate?" Davy_ asked. "Aye" said Deadman. "Hey, Deadman, What does "Aye" mean?" Davy- asked. "Well" Deadman replied, " If yer to be talkin' like a pirate, ye be needin' ter know some slang" "OK!." Davy_ said! ( he only understood "If, to, be, like, a, pirate, be, know, some, slang" )

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[Davy_Mcwrecker]

Hello? Is anyone gona post?

[Captain Del]

I like the direction.. but your posts are extraordinarily short, and hard to follow. Try separating your story in to paragraphs, adding deeper descriptions, and adding more substance to each part.

Your story has a lot of potential. Just try to bring it to a grander scheme.

[Tiberius Fireskull]

Aye, I would have to agree with Del. Check out some of the other story threads, and try posting larger chapters at a time. Also, this is just my opinion, but do you have to be Davy_? I mean, it would make a little more sense to just be Davy. :P Just my opinion.

I can see the story can become great though!

[Davy_Mcwrecker]

Thx mates! But My Sotry Is EXTREMELY short so im trying to keep it slow. Also I dont get enough time to wright paragraphs like Davy Fs.

EDIT: He will change his name, give him some time

[Davy_Mcwrecker]

Davy_ soon realized what he was being thrown into. He had found himself thrown onto a galleon and was supposed to become a Pirate? That was ludicres! They Sailed & they sailed for hours. Then they reached a shabby isle. There were some hills. But it was mosly grass, sand & ocean. But, then. He turned to his left & what he saw looked like a jungle. There were wasps half his size, Scorpions That Were Big enough to Knock Down a fully grown man! Even Deadman! Deadman Said "Follow me!". Davy_ followed & found myself at a door on the ground. "Come In Before The Scorpions & Wasps Get You!" Deadman Bellowed. Davy_ ran in as fast as he could and stoped, wide eyed, panting. There room infront of him was covered with rum, beer, grog, whiskey, liqour, and other strange Alchoholic bevrages.
In The ENTIRE ROOM, people from short Swordmans, to tall muscular Dollers.
Deadman said" Davy_, Welcome To Rumrunner Isle, & to the home of Emerald Sea Gang!!"
The Emerald Sea Gang!?! That Was The Most Legendary Guild in the Carribean!
Davy_, Youll learn how to use yer father's Broadsword. Now GET OVER HERE Peter!!!! HE NEEDS TO LEARN HOW TO SPEAK PIRATE!" yelled Deadman. A Pirate walked over to Davy_ & said "こんにちは。どのようにですか？" "What?" Davy_ said.
"שלום. מה שלומך?" He Said. "WHAT?" Davy_ shouted.
"Hello. How Are You?" Peter said. "Good. And you?" Davy_ asked.
"Fine" Peter Replied, "Now To Teach You some slang...: YE means you, YER mean your, TER mean to, and FER means for." Davy Replied "Um, OK."
"USE IT.." but Peter was cut off bya loud Explosion. The Next Thing He Knew He saw Deadman's Body Fly Across The room.

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[Davy_Mcwrecker]

How Was That?

[Davy_Mcwrecker]

"Deadman!!!"Davy_ shouted. Across the room there were dozens of pirates hurt & a kid, about 13, named zombilious, or Zombieboy for short was dead. Then He turned and looked into the face of Jolly Roger.

"Ah! Is it not Davy_Mcwrecker" Roger said cooly.
"Ive just been eluded by a sly little pirate named Davy Fireskull." Roger said Coldly
"I have no mercy!" He said again, "Prepare to DIE!!!

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Then Jolly Was casting green smoke from his skeleton hand. The smoke, Casting over Davy_, smothered him and lifted him off the ground. But Then, Peter Shouted a Curse & flung an Undead Aztec coin at Jolly."Ze tmy přichází světlo! Od Dark až do světla! Od světlem Dark! Z Světlo přichází Darknesa!" He shouted.

The rest off the soke went into Davy_, But he felt good, Stronger, Blissful!

Jolly Was slowly Deteriating. The The Circle On Roger's Forehead glowed...


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[Tiberius Fireskull]

Looks pretty good mate... looks like I got included too eh?

[Davy_Mcwrecker]

Yeah, Oh & I tried to friend u on POTCO but u had too many friends lol

[Davy_Mcwrecker]

Jolly Slowley Fell Apart But For Every Bone That Fell, The Circle Burned brighter. BRIGHTER. Soont the whole room was Pure white And Every person was Black, like a silloutte. Then BAM.


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Davy_ Looked around. Jolly was gone & the room was back to normal.... but there laid Zombieboy dead, Deadman Unconcious and Peter... Peter!!! Peter's body was sitting up and was withered. Hairless, open eyed & mothed, Davy_ screamed. There were no eyes in the sockets, Just blood coming out about 5 Gallons per minute and his mouth, His jaw was brocken apart on one spot & his jaw that wasnt borken was fleshless. His hands were bones He shirt had melted to his skin.

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"Ugh," Deadman said as he came to. " OH NO! EVERYONE GET UP! ZOMBIE BOY IS DEAD!!!!" Deadman Shouted. Everyone got up simultaniously and screamed. Deadman turned aroud horror stuck. " Peter Didnt, Did he?" Deadman asked moneatonely. " I dont know, Jolly was about to kill me & Peter shouted wierd words and threw a coin.." Davy_ was hyperventalaiting at this point,"Then there was a bright light and then a loud noise then this!!!"

"The words didnt happen to sound like ' ' Ze tmy přichází světlo! Od Dark až do světla! Od světlem Dark! Z Světlo přichází Darknesa! ' ' did they?"" Deadman asked coldly.
"Aye" Davy_ said heartily.
"THIS IS NO LAUGHING MATTER DAVY_! THAT CURSE WAS A CURSE THAT KILLED WHO EVER THE USER CASTS THE CURSE ON BUT ALSO KILLS THE USER!!!!" Deadman Shouted Fouriously.
"BESIDES YOUR NAME ISNT EVEN PIRATEY, IT SOUNDS LIKE YER AN IDIOTIC CONTRAPITON!!!"Deadman sanpped.
"AT LEAST MY NAME DOESNT SOUND LIKE IVE BEEN KILLED BY CRAB!" Davy_ retorted.


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10 years had past & Davy had long since changed his name. He had Become a respectable pirate & led his own crew. Davy once again found himself at rumrunner's. It broght bach memories of Peter, & when He Had became his owned pirate & slaughtered Deadman & the rest of his guild that he could find.

"Capt. Davy!" Josaer Cried. " I have found 21 Undead ships closing in!"
"WE CAN TAKE 'EM!" Davy Shouted. The entire Crew, Josear, Daniel, Cody Shipsinker, and Davy's First Mate, Jack Scurvybones replied " AYE! "

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[Davy_Mcwrecker]

guys keep in mind all these pirates are REAL pirates ive met over the yaaars.

[Davy_Mcwrecker]

After About 3 hours, Josear was faint, Jack was still fighting hard, Cody Had Been pushed in to water & Daniel was still reviveing him. Davy Was weak. "Guys!" he shouted.
" We Wont Make It. I'm Gonna Have To Sacrafice Myself!" Davy repeated.
" NOO!!!!!" the crew replied except Jack who was about to get his throat slitted & was managing to break free.
" Guys Thats 20 Ships. We Did Good But We Cant Make It!"
"YES WE CAN!!!!!!!!!!!!" Jack outbursted taking his dagger & gouging the heads of about 15 skellies.
"Jack That Leaves The Powder Keg Runner and The Captai-" but Davy was cut off.
The entire front half of the ship was on fire & Jack lay there motionless, after a loud explosion.
" Jack!!!!" Davy Shouted, but it was too late the ship broke apart & jack was gone.......

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