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Old 09-25-2011, 01:35 AM
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Darklight ~ Book One

[darklight]

[book one]
]The eternal flame[

1

As darkness fell, the anonymous man could feel the sharp, crisp, cool wisps of air, and the moment his eyes opened, he knew that something was not right. Usually, at this hour, he could feel the power of the night run through him, the cold powering him. But not tonight.
Tonight, he felt a strange warmth, weakening him. As he left abandoned building, he couldn’t help but wonder, what he would do if he found a mortal that could defeat him strength wise, with his corrupt, twisted powers weakened. Tonight, he would have to rely on wits, and his own strength. Tonight, he would have to avoid the strengthy ones.

Tonight.



As the man left for the night, he could see a strange light. He looked.
No, the moon wasn’t full, in fact, it was a new moon, a night where he should be strongest. But he could see everything, almost as clear as day. Almost. As he hurriedly walked down the street, the man took a look over several houses. The Browns, the Moore’s, the Cutshaw’s, the Russell’s, the Smiths. Ah, the Smiths. He has enjoyed terrorizing them for years know.
The man entered the house, after reading the W.E.L.C.0.M.E mat.
Thank goodness! At least he could still turn off sound.
After checking through the house, and making sure they were all asleep, he went up the stairs to the bedrooms. The first bedroom he opened, he found John and Samantha Smith. After making sure he would not wake them up, he crept over to Mrs. Smith…

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Ok. This is my 2nd attempt at writing a story, but hopefully, this story will be better than my last. My Grammar should be better, and I should know how to work the Posts to look good.

Also, I wll try to put out a new chapter every week. If I get enough good rating's, I will do my best to put out the next chapter early.

Please rate and tell me If I need to improve on anything.

~Davy_Mcwrecker