View Single Post
  #4  
Old 04-29-2011, 02:34 AM
finn's Avatar
finn finn is offline
Test Pirate
finn's Primary Pirate Info

Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: Tormenta Cave
Posts: 212
My Mood: NoMood
finn is scurvy dog
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mr. Skiperdoo View Post
Grammar mistakes aside, my best advice for you would be to write the story in your own style. Creating new and innovative ideas can be a great way to make a story that's different.

Just remember to make them a little longer.
thank you i will be updating every day and if i miss a day i will make a longer part the next time

but again thank u for your advice