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Old 04-29-2011, 02:27 AM
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Originally Posted by finn View Post
I'm sure u have all noticed how my story has no dialog well dialog doesnt make a good story dialog is a great add on and i am going to have dialog to make this better but there has been barly 2 chances for that
Grammar mistakes aside, my best advice for you would be to write the story in your own style. Creating new and innovative ideas can be a great way to make a story that's different.

Just remember to make them a little longer.