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Originally Posted by Captain Sharktooth
Good start mate! I would makes the chapters longer, but if you are making a short story, I guess not too long then. Also, you should make a space between each line, just so people can see it better and it comes out neater.  |
Thanks for the suggestions, but the epilogue is just short for dramatic effect. It'll all be explained toward the middle/end of the story. And thanks for the compliment, I appreciate it cause its my first story.