[Luckie OClover]

Davy, I really liked this chapter & the developing characters.
Thanks for having some humor in your story, it helps make the characters more real.
I even appreciated the Piratey Pep Talk for the new crew.
& just to let you know, I laugh every time I read Smelly's name!

I'm not gonna ask to be added to your story,
but if Luckie were to show up, I wouldn't be upset - unless she dies -