Thread: The Tale Of Tobias (tell me what you think pls:)
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Old 07-25-2010, 11:30 PM
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....and then he met Potions Pirate. (And who knows what she did to him... muahaha..)

Pretty good, but I kinda have to agree with muffin. Keep working, and you'll be a great author some day!
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