ok i am grinning from ear to ear...I always smile at some point in your stories...
I think Lawrence might have acted a lil more of the proud and stubborn type...by a)acting stupid when Kat hugged Nate, mumbling and stomping off or whatever and b) not taking the gold...but then again, he's a smart character...i dunno
Love the change up, the more the merrier...and it'll be interesting how they run Kat to ground.