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Originally Posted by Nate Swordwalker
Nice job Keeper! As Crest said, the way you use an onomatopoeia to describe what is happening shows some incredible writing skills. It was kind of confusing though, such as this part right here. He is on the ship, right? Why would there be a skeleton on his ship? I am confused. Help me out a little please?
Can't wait for the next one mate. Looking forward to it!
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You may notice that this is
In the Kraken's Grasp (Continued) Very important, those things in parentheses. If you read the first part of the story, it is implied that they have been brought back to serve good ol' Jolly.
As for your comments Crestshot, I
wanted it to be a little confusing. This story has little to no closure, which of course means it has yet to be completed. Interesting concept, no?