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The Stealthy Pirate 01-27-2011 02:33 AM

Dead men tell no tales
 
ok, im giving writing a shot... if you dont like it... let me know...

P.S the title doesnt really have to do with this story...




Prolouge


He woke up with a blistering headache, but matters much more important rose up, such as: Where was he? Who was he? He heard voices, but they seemed far away due to the pounding surf against his skull. The voices came nearer, and he tried to sit up, but the pain was too much to bear. He heard bits and pieces such as: " our savior.. " "it cannot be him" " he is too tall" He frowned, savior? That doesn't really sound like me, he thought. Then he woke. He managed to grasp the rusty, dented bars on the door. He gasped when he saw where he was. It was Cutthroat Isle, home to the infamous skeleton army of Jolly Roger. He recognized the uniform of the guard outside his cell. It was Navy. Suddenly, a royal and imposing man stood in front of him looking at him with slight amusement breaking across his amazingly pale face. " You know who I am,no? " "You are the assassin Gustav Schidmt, who is working for Cutler Beckett, to enforce 'order' in the Caribbean," I replied. " And i suppose you don't know who you are?" I shook my head. " Well, let me fill you in. You are the infamous pirate Stealthy Cannoneer. You foolishly attacked the EITC treausure fleet with your band of misfits." He then blacked out again.



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Well, did you like it or not? I would like to add more characters to the story and an editor would be great. PM me if you want to be either. Also, please give me truthful reviews. I don't want to take up space in the forum if noone likes it.

Roger Sharkshot 01-27-2011 02:55 AM

good good u should do it

The Stealthy Pirate 01-27-2011 03:38 AM

ok, but i could use some names for my crew that im gonna start....

The Stealthy Pirate 01-27-2011 03:41 AM

Chapter 1
 
no sorry cant do it yet...

SEAKING23 01-27-2011 04:00 AM

love it. epic

Captain Sharktooth 01-27-2011 05:06 AM

You need to make it longer, and also make a new line for each speaker so it is easier to understand...

The Stealthy Pirate 01-27-2011 04:08 PM

Chapter 1: Boarding and Tortuga


Stealthy Cannoneer woke up with a start. He was being shaken by one of his crew members.

" Captain, you're needed on ship," said Henry Mcbones, an old friend of his.

He got out of bed, put on his trademark hat, and walked outside onto the wooden deck of his ship, Lightning Phoenix, and took hold of the wheel. He realized they were in major trouble. Two ten-gun Navy ships were circling around the ship. He saw the captain of the ship on his right and the ship on his left.

" We are captains Simmons and Blye, and by order of the Royal Navy you shall not pass!!"

Stealthy smiled to himself, and shouted, " FIRE THE CHAIN SHOTS! "

The chain shots hit all three sails on both sides, making them topple over with a resounding creak and killing all the navy soldiers on the boats.

I then shouted again to his twelve- man crew, " SIX OF YE TAKE EACH SHIP, I WILL BE ON THE LEFT ONE."

The grappling hooks were loaded and fired, and Stealthy and his six members swung across to the ship. He immediatly went to ship's hold, and saw some jewerly, a few very nice broadswords, and a chicken. Then he heard a voice at the back of the hold.

It said, " Come on pirates, get me out of here!"

Stealthy walked over and found a man in a crate with incredibly red hair. He took his pistol out and fired it at the lock.

" Thank you mate, can i join yer crew?"

" I don't see why not, since we are heading to Tortuga after this boarding." I replied.

So, the now eight members moved out of the hold, along with the jewerly, the swords, and the chicken, swung across back to the Lightning Phoenix, and his other half of the crew was already there.

" Where to now, captain?" Henry asked.

" Tortuga,mate." I said with a crooked grin on my face.

I then turned back to the man we found on the Navy ship.

" What is your name, mate?" I asked.

" Well, everyone calls me Nutty Redhead, cause I go crazy when I see skeletons swinging my sword everywhere and killin' 'em."

"Tortuga ahoy!" A lookout shouted.

After we ported we went to the King's Arm, where we got ourselves rum. We were all going to stay at my shack on Tortuga, or some people might go to the Bowdash Mansion. When I finally stumbled outside to my shack, I fell asleep on my bed quickly.


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So did you like or not, if you want to be part of the story please PM me.

Red Beard 01-30-2011 03:20 AM

I liked it mate!! As you continue to build on the story I will most definitely stay tuned. Keep up the good work.


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