Pirate Islands: Part 1
 

Characters:
Good Pirates:

Chris- A new pirate who is still getting the hang of things. The thing is, the Dark Pirates want him on his side because he has a certain power that can help them take over the Pirate Islands. Chris doesn’t believe he doesn’t have the power yet, but as soon as he does, everything goes wild

James- Chris’ best friend. They have been friends since they were five years old. James became a pirate when he was eight years old. Now he is fifteen. He has been fighting the Dark Pirates ever since he joined them. Unfortunately, things between James and Chris are beginning not to go so well

Kinder- He has been a pirate for years now and still enjoys it. He is also Chris’ Master. Kinder has to keep a good look out for his crew. He is also the assistant captain

Captain Mike- The head Captain of the crew. The crew’s name is called the Adventurers. He was part of the Dark Pirates, but he went to the good pirates’ side.

… More will be introduced in the story


Dark Pirates:

Captain Jones- The meanest pirate in the Pirate Islands. He has always wanted to take over the Pirate Islands but was always unsuccessful. He was unsuccessful, until now. His objective right now is to kidnap Chris and turn him in a Dark Pirate. But will he succeed?

…More will be introduced in the story


*I did ask for permission first before I posted this story, this will have pistols and people will die. I thought I would tell you be fore you guys start saying this is against therules

Chapter 1 coming soon
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Interesting im gonna love this story! I'm in it! Lol cant wait for Chapter 1!

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Here it is:


"Boom! Boom!" thunder went. There was a meeting going on in the Tortuga Inn.
"Ok, I want you to introduce you to a new member to the crew." Captain Mike began. "His name's Chris".
Out came a short boy with brown hair.
"H-Hello" he said nervously. "My n-name is Chris"
"Hello Chris" said the crew.
"Thanks to James, he knows Chris. He invited him to this crew and I want you all to be nice to him." said Mike. "He is only fourteen". After the meeting, they all left except for Kinder, Mike , and Chris
"Kinder, can I talk to you?" asked Mike
"Sure" answered Kinder.
"I want to you to train Chris. Get him to understand the basics of being a pirate and after the basics are done, teach him the hard stuff" said Mike
"Yes captain" said Kinder agreeing. They all left. But somewhere else, a dark pirate was.
"Grr..." He growled. His name is Captain Jones. "Oh, how I hate those pirates. I wanted that boy". One of his soldiers cam in. It was his best soldier, Ben.
"Sir, are you sure you want him?" asked Ben. "I mean he's only fourteen".
"I told you once before, he has the power I want" stated Jones. "The Power I need to take over the Islands". He began to laught. "Muahaha!"

Chapter 2 coming soon...

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Ok sure no problem

Thx I love Stories Like This. :)

Here is Chapter two!!


It was early in the morning. Both Kinder and Chris got up and went to the training shack on Tortuga.
"All right, ready to start your training?" asked Kinder
"Yeah, I guess..." answered Chris.
"We are going to begin with the basics" said Kinder handing him a sword.
"What do I do with this?" asked Kinder
"Destroy those practice dummies" said Kinder. Chris went over and started to fight the dummies.
"Good" said Kinder. "Now, let's move on". They finished up the training and met the rest of the crew outside the shack.
"I want you to meet another pirate." said Mike when they came out. Out came a man with an eye patch over his right eye. "This is Swash"
"Ahoy Chris!" said Swash.
"Ahoy." Chris said. They went aboard the ship.
"Hey man, how was training?" asked James to Chris.
"I wasn't that bad." answered Chris.
"That's good, but being a pirate isn't easy, it's hard work, trust me." said James.
"I can tell." said Chris.
"Kinder," Mike called.
"Yes, cap'n?" Kinder said coming over.
"When do you think it would be the best time to tell him about Jones?" asked Mike.
"Probably when we arrive to Padres." answered Kinder
"Yeah," agreed Mike. "I'll have Swash tell him about Jones"
"He is a good sory teller" said Kinder. Later, they arrived to Padres. They went into the inn.
"Swash," said Mike. Swash nodded. He knew what it meant. He went over to Chris.
"Chris, I need to tell you a story about an evil pirate." said Swash. "You need to know this. It won't take long".
"Umm... alright" said Chris.
"Ahem... Long ago, an evil pirate named Jones ruled the Islands long before us good pirates came." started Swash. "He destroyed all things good. He killed many citizens that lived, but also put some into slavery. But one day, he lost that power. That was when us pirates came. We told the citzens of the Islands to stay calm and that we are going to do the best we can to stop this nonsense. Jones then dissappeared. No one knows. Now, in order for him to rule these Islands again, He has to have someone with a certain power".
"Stop right there Swash" commanded Mike.
"He has the right to know" said Swash
"The right to know what?" asked Chris getting anxious.
"He will find out" Mike said starting to get angry.
"When? When he's a level two pirate?" asked Swash.
"Probably" answered Mike
"I think he should be warned in advance!!" yelled Swash.
"He'll find out!" yelled MIke
"Can someone please tell me what's going on?!?" asked Mike loudly. All of a sudden, there was a loud bang.
"Where is Chris?!" yelled Jones

Chapter 3 coming soon

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Intense! I have the power!

Lol Chris but I be a Good story teller The Pen is mightier than the sword.

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Edit: Chapter 2 is now finished!! Keep checking soon for Chapter 3

"Why do you want to know?" asked Mike.
"I want him on my side!!" Jones yelled
"Well you can't have him!" Mike yelled back.
"He has the power I want!!" Jones said getting really angry.
"What is with this power?!?" Chris yelled. "Oops!"
"There you are Chris..." Jones said going up to him.
"Get away from him" Mike said angerily. Jones looked at him, picked him up and threw Mike in the air.
"Captain!!" Kinder yelled running up to him.
"Ugh... My head" Mike moaned. "Make sure Jones doesn't take him..."
"Now, where was I? Ah... yes, you're coming with me Chris" Jones said. All of a sudden, bees swarmed Jones.
"Ahh!" He yelled madly.
"Leave him alone..." someone said. It was another pirate named Dan
"Well, well, well, look who's here" Jones said laughing. "Dan McHenson". Dan gave Jones a dirty look.
"I said let him go." Dan said again
"I don't think so" Jones said. Dan took out a voodoo doll and threw it. Jones just stood there.
"That was lame..." Jones said laughing. "Now if you'll excuse me... Chris and I have thing to do". Then, there was a gunshot. It hit Jones then he disappeared. James shot it.
"Where did he do?" Chris asked. "Is he dead?"
"No... He just went back to his cave." James answered
"Are you ok Chris?" Dan asked.
"Yeah..." Chris said not moving. "It was scary though"
"It always is." answered James. They went to the ship. Mike was still hurt.
"Um guys... I will be right back" Swash said. "I forgot something at the inn"
"Alright," said Kinder. Swash left. He teleported to the place where Jones is hidden.
"You will get him sir" Swash said
"I better..." Jones answered.


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In Jones' cave, Swash and Jones were chatting about how to get Chris.
"So how are you going to get him?" asked Swash
"I have a plan..." Jones answered. "Just give me a couple of minutes"
"Alright cap'n" said Swash. Swash left the cave. Chris was getting ready for thier trip.
"Aye! Chris! Are ye ready?" shouted Dan
"Just about!!" Chris shouted back, heading out the door. But when he went outside. Tortuga was empty. There was no one there, not even his crew.
"Hello??" Chris hollered. It made an echo. "Hello? Is anyone there? Mike? Anyone?". No one answred. He then heard a rustle in the bushes.
"What was that?" Chris was startled. He then saw a shadow behind him. It was Jones.
"Hello Chris" He said with a big smile on his face.
"Ahhh!! Someon hel..." Chris's mouth was closed by Jone's hands.
"No one can hear you..." Jones said. "It's all part of my plan". Chris tried to say something but was muffled.
"Muhaha!!" Jones laughed. Then he disappeared with Chris and everything went back to normal.
"Darn it!! What is taking him so long" Dan wondered. He went into the Tavern. "Chris? Where are you?"
"He left" said the Bartender.
"Huh? No he didn't. He's not on the ship" Dan answered.
"Hmm... then I don't know where he went" said the Bartender going back to work.
"Oh man... not again..." Dan knew exactly what happened. He ran outside to the crew.
"Did you find him?" asked Kinder.
"No, but I know where he is." said Dan.
"Where?" Kinder asked
"Jones..." Dan said.
"Wait...What?" Kinder said confused. Dan ran to Mike.
"Captain! Jones kidnapped Chris!!" Dan yelled running into the captain's quarters. Mike stopped what he was doing and looked at Dan.
"What do you mean?" asked the Captain. Kinder then came in to know more.
"You know that power he has to make everything disppear except for one thing he wants?" asked Dan.
"Yeah..." Both Mike and Kinder said.
"Well... That's exactly what happened." Dan said.
"Not again..." Mike said.
"What should we do?" asked Kinder.
"What we did last time when we saved Dan..." Mike said.
"Oh yeah... I forgot that happened to me" answered Dan.

Chapter 5 coming soon!

:o get yer filthy hands off me jones!

Haha! We'll have to see about that

Arrr I'll Save ye Chris ( Swash Takes Chris's Rum ) HA HA.

Next Chapter will be coming soon!!

Here is the next Chapter!!


Jones put Chris in a cage.
"Now that I have you, I can make you join our army and help us rule these islands again!!!" Jones said loudly.
"You'll never make me do your dirty work Jones" Chris said angerily.
"We'll have to see about that..." Jones said. "Swash! Watch him!!". Jones left for a couple of minutes.
"You are a traitor..." Chris said.
"I've always been, Chris" answered Swash. "for five years!!"
"Why did you join the crew anyway?" asked Chris.
"My mission was to make sure you get in. I'm the one who asked Mike to let you in." answered Swash.
"Why you little....!!" Chris was about to call him a nasty name.
"Nuh uh uh...." Swash interupted. "We don't want to call each other nasty names, do we?. Mike gave Swash a dirty look.
"Here, wear this neckalace" Swash commanded.
"No" Chris said.
"What?" Swash looked at him.
"I said no..." repeated Chris. Swash took out his pistol.
"Put it on or die..." Swash said. Chris didn't like the choices Swash gave him, so he put up on putting on the neckalce. Chris than fainted. Swash smirked a bit.
"Excellent..." Swash said to himself. Jones came in
"Did he put it on?" asked Jones.
"Yup... he should wake up soon" Swash answered.
"Excellent..." Jones smiled evily. Chris woke up.
"Ugh..." Chris moaned. "Jones... let me out". Swash opened the cage and Chris got out.
"The power... your power is to rise the dead and make them our army and you can give commands." Jones said. "Here are your weapons". Jones handed him a sword, a pistol, a voodoo doll, grenades, and a staff.
"Tonight, we begin Operation: Take over Islands!!!" Jones yelled loudly. they all cheered/

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Mike went to the graveyard.
"Rise Skeletons!!" yelled Chris. The graveyard keeper saw him.
"Hey kid! Stop!" yelled the guy. Mike just looked at him.
"Did you hear me kid?" the guy asked.
"Skeletons... ATTACK!!!" yelled Chris. The guy ran screaming. One of the skeletons blocked his way.
"Going somewhere?" the skeleton asked. The guy stopped dead, looking at the skeleton. The skeleton choked the guy and he fell to the ground dead. They left before someone else saw them.

The next morning, the pirates got together and talked about how to get Chris back.
"Maybe we can do the same thing that Jones did." Kinder asked.
"No, too risky." answered Mike. Just then a soldier came in.
"Pirates, I need you to see something" said the soldier.
"Umm... ok" said Mike. The pirates went with him to the graveyard. When they got there, they were surprised to have seen what has happened. The graves were dug up and there was the grave keeper there on the ground, dead.
"Who could've done this?" asked Mike.
"I don't know, we suspect it was Jones." answered the soldier. Mike an the soldier kept talking. Dan went over to a grave.
"Hey Kinder! Come here!" Dan yelled, signalling Kinder. Kinder ran over.
"Yeah? What's up?" asked Kinder.
"Isn't that your father?" Dan said suspiously. Kinder looked at it blankly.
"Yeah..." Kinder said quietly. Here is what it said.


"I am going to get that sick loser" Kinder sweared. "I swear..."
"So, is it too late to get Chris back, capn'?" asked James.
"No, he may be on the bad side now but we will get him back" Mike said. Kinder was mad on the way back to the ship.
"Dan, what's wrong with Kinder?" asked James.
"Chris rose the dead, it also included his father." Dan explained.
"What?" James was surprised.
"He swore revenge on Jones to get his father back" Dan explained again.
"That's just not right..." James said. All of a sudden, there was a boom.
Back on the island where they just were, there was a big boom.
"I'm baaack!!!" said Jones. The crew crew looked over to the island. Luckily they weren't far away.

Next Chapter is when the battle begins....

Next Chapter coming later Tonight!!

This...is...the...FINAL CHAPTER!!!


The pirates rushed to the island. When they arrived there, the island was already half destroyed. The buildings were all burnt down. Some soldiers lying on the ground ground dead, and some innocent villagers.
"This needs to be stopped" said Mike.
"Definately" agreed Kinder.
"Dan!!" Mike called over Dan. Dan ran over to him.
"Aye captain?" asked Dan.
"Go find Chris before things get worse" said Mike. Dan nodded and ran off to find Chris.
"Captain... I'll be right back" Kinder said.
"Alright" said Mike. On some other part of the island, Chris was about to kill someone.
"Get ready to say goodbye to your life..." Chris said.
"N-n-no..." the man said. "Pl-pl-please don't!!". All of a sudden, The man disappeared.
"Whoa.. where did he go?" Chris said. Then, Chris found himself flying through the air. He then hit a building. The man that Chris held hostage walked up to him.
"Thought you can get rid of me life huh?" asked the man.
"W-who are y-you?" Chris said. He was scared.
"Your worst nightmare" the man said. It was dark so Chris couldn't really see his face. The man took out his voodoo doll and made Chris go fly up the air. Chris just stayed in the air.
"Now..." the man began. "If you don't go back to the good side then you die... if you do, you stay alive". Then the man dropped Chris to the ground and then left. Chris didn't move. Kinderwent to look around the damage. Without knowing, his undead father snuck up behind him and attacked him.
"You'll now die!!" yelled Steve Kinder. Kinder just blocked him.
'Dad!! It's me.. Kinder, your son!!" Kinder yelled.
"You're probably just a fake!!" His father yelled.
"No!! It's really me!! Your wife's name is Mary" Kinder yelled. Steve just dropped everything.
"You really are him... I left before you were born..." said Steve. Kinder smiled a bit. They sat down and talked. On the other side of the island, Dan found Chris.
"Chris..." Dan ran over to him. Dan grabbed Chris' arm. "you need to snap out of this. Chris pulled his arm away from Dan.
"Let go of me!!" Chris yelled. Chris slapped Dan.
"You don't know what you are doing!!" yelled Dan.
"Yes I do!!" disagreed Chris.
"No you don't!!" Dan yelled again. Chris wasn't paying attention. He then disappeared. Back with Mike and the rest of the pirates.
"Well...well...well... lookee at what we have here" Jones said going up to them. "The itty bitty pirates. You guys can't beat me and my army."
"Oh yeah... let the battle begin...." said Mike. They both took out their swords. Mike then appeared. Dan joined. Kinder and his father then came. Mike and Jone fought. The undead were fighting the other pirates.
"Chris and Swash... Help!!!" Jones yelled when he realized Mike was too strong. They both joined him.
"Get ready to die Mike!!!" Chris yelled. He stabbed Mike with his sword. Mike fell down.
"No!!" Dan and nKinder yelled running over to try and help Mike.
"Good job Chris!!" Jones said. Chris' evil ways were wearing off.
"What have I done?" Chris said to himself quietly. He ran off.
"Now it's time for Kinder and Dan..." Jones said. Jones was about to go to Kinder.
"Get away from my son..." Steve said. He then threw a dagger and it hit Jones right in the chest. He fell down dead. Swash and the rest of the army disppeared.
"Dan... Kinder..." Mike said quietly. "It's your job to take over the crew...".
"No... captain" said Kinder. "We're not ready..."
"Yes you guys are..." said Mike. Those were his last words. Kinder and Dan Carried Mike's body on to the ship. They threw him into the water. James was mad at Chris for killing their captainb. He decided that they shouldn't be friends any more. On Jones' Island, Swash was happy.
"It's now my turn!!!" he yelled. They all cheered.

To Be Continued....

I hope you liked this part. The next Part will be up soon....

Nice story, can't wait for the ending. :)

Awesome :D and how dare he cage me hehe what they dont know is im a double agent :D

i want to be a new character! lol jk

Wow! As soon as i saw this thread i just couldn't stop reading the story! Best dang one on the site, the very! Can't wait for the next bit o the story!

I hope to put the next part soon

I can't decide if I should either put up the 2nd part now or later...