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The power of the undead
Oohh, ominous title. >:-) Me likey. Anywho, I'm gonna take a shot at making a story. So, this is basically a story about a person :p. Thats all I can say for now, here's the epilogue:
-Two Years Earlier- "It's over, Jolly. Just go back to your grave." "I... I wont be defeated by swine like you!" Jolly Roger said grasping his chest. "I'll take you all with me!" He yelled, unleashing various purple energy blasts. Most missed, but one caught a pirate straight in the heart. He flew back, crashing into a stone wall. "I'll see you all in the Underworld! Hahaha, HAHAHA!!!!!!" Jolly said as he disappeared, laughing like a maniac. "Will! Will, are you OK?!? WILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Chapter 4 Saved! Roger woke up with a huge headache. He also woke up screaming, but that has nothing to do with the headache. The main cause of his headache was the fact that he just lost with two other people to one pirate. His pride was kinda injured. But enough about that, the fact, and the surprising fact, is he wasn’t dead after all of that voodoo stuff. “AH! Don’t sting me anymore, I’m allergic!” Roger screamed. A pirate was looking at him. “Uh, what? Why would I......” His voice trailed off. “Where am I?” Roger asked, quickly changing the subject. “Devils Anvil.” He said simply. Silence followed, while Roger waited for more explanation. “Okay, if you’re not going to just tell me I’ll ask. WHY.” Roger said, emphasizing the last word. “Why what?” “Why am I here?” “I don’t know.” “You don’t know.” “No, that’s why I said ‘I don’t know’” “Okay, why are you here?” “My hideout.” “Hideout?” “You ask a lot of questions, you know that?” The pirate said, clearly annoyed. He was wearing a brown pirate hat, and a worn down brown coat with equally worn down black pants. He sent off a vibe of poor, yet he didn’t look skinny, which is normally associated with being poor. “Wait, where’s Stealthy? And that weird pirate that blew everything up?” Roger asked, suddenly standing up. “Uh, who?” “My best friend and some random pirate were fighting this other pirate, he had this weird looking sword and could control voodoo and.... OW! Why can’t I remember anything?” Roger asked. “Again, I don’t know. I found you washed up on the shore. I’m fairly certain someone left you there, considering you’d drown if you floated from anywhere to here. It’s practically isolated from everywhere else.” “Okay, before I go on, who are you exactly?” Roger asked, confused. “I’m The Sharpshooter. And ironically, I can’t hit the broad side of a rock with a gun. Knives are more my thing.” The Sharpshooter said. “Who are you?” “I’m Roger, Roger Swordshot. So, The Sharpshooter-” Roger started, but was interrupted. “Call me Sharp, it saves time.” Sharp said. “Okay, Sharp, where’s the nearest ship?” Roger asked, eager to look for Stealthy. “Oh no, you’re not going alone. I’m coming with you.” Sharp said. “And why should I take you with me?” Roger asked, not exactly trusting this new person. “Correction, I’m taking you on my ship, because, unlike most pirates, I actually have a conscience. Granted, it can be annoying at times, but at least I didn’t shove you in a cave with some crabs.” Sharp said matter-of-factly. “Fine, let’s head out.” Roger said, heading for the dock. “Wait, take this.” Sharp said, tossing Roger his Thunderspine sword. “Where did you.....?” Roger said as he caught it. “It was on you when I found you. I tried using it to make some thunder, but for some reason it didn’t work for me.” Sharp said shrugging. “Anyway, let’s get going.” Sharp and Roger went toward the dock, and boarded Sharp’s ship, the Silver Rouge. Sign ups are open! I need more people! Thanks. Pirate Name: (I.e. Swash cyber shot) Pirate Notoriety: Favorite Weapon (Includes Sailing and cannon.): Fav Weapon Lvl: Personality: Good or Evil?: Other: NOTE: When I say favorite "weapon" I mean generally. Like "Sword" or "Voodoo Doll" Characters: Pirate: Stealthy Cannoneer/Stealth Level: 41 Weapon: Blunderbuss Weapon Level: 28 Personality: Crazy/Drunk Pirate name? Roger Swordshot level: 50 Weapon: Sword weapon level(s): Maxxed Personality: loves to fight, also a good leader. Pirate Name:Roger Sharkshot Pirate Notoriety: 46 Favorite Weapon: Grenade,Sword Fav Weapon Lvl:25,30 Personality:Grenades go BOOM yay a.k.a. likes explosive and is awesome Good or Evil?: good Pirate Name:Mr. Awesome. Pirate Notoriety: 32 Favorite Weapon: voodoo doll. Fav Weapon Lvl:25 Personality:Corrupt and twisted Good or Evil?: Evil. (I need at least ONE evil person. xD) If you wanna be a kinda major character, wait till someone picks your fav weapon then pick it please. If you wanna be a MAJOR major character, act fast cause it's first come first serve I'd appreciate it if you actually READ the story before signing up, but I can't actually stop you from signing up, seeing as I couldn't really tell the difference. And please leave comments, suggestions, criticism, etc. |
Good start mate! I would makes the chapters longer, but if you are making a short story, I guess not too long then. Also, you should make a space between each line, just so people can see it better and it comes out neater. :D
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Here ya go:
Pirate: Stealthly Cannoneer/Stealth Level: 41 Weapon: Blunderbuss Weapon Level: 28 Personality: Crazy/Drunk |
Thanks. :) I'll need at least one more person before the next chapter though. I'm pretty happy though, one sign up in two days is pretty good, I think.
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Pirate name? Roger swordshot
level: 50 Weapon: anything that can hurt someone weapon level(s): maxed Personality: loves to fight, also a good leader. |
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There is actually a weapon thats a combo of a pistol and sword. just looks like a sword, with a pistol attached on the hilt, and the barrel faces the same way the blade does. would fit my name perfectly! but do what ever ye want :)
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Anything but El patron, lol :)
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BTW Sharp...... Good... If you read The Lost Phantom, I kinda want to be like Witchdoctor Dan, but more crazy.
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Its on The Sailor's Yarn Sharp...
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OK, Im going to explain how I post the chapters. I put the newest chapter in the original thread, and then put a link to the old chapter, which I post. That way it'll be easier to get to the newest chapter. If that seems to confusing, you'll get used to it.
EDIT: First chapter has been posted. |
Oh come on! Not that drunk, though I was cracking up. Like so::laughks2::laughks2:
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Glad ya liked it xD And in case you didn't notice, you weren't drunk at all in that episode :p. Im scared to find out what your character is like when he is drunk. (And I'm the one writing the story!)
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Aye, make sure he gets drunk eventually.
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I like the part when I blow up the navy guys :D
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Wow, nobody has posted in like, a month and this is still on the first page. I find that funny. Anyway, I've been suffering from writers block. (I know whats planned AFTER this next chapter, but have absolutely no ideas for this chapter.) So, the next chapter might not be posted for another week or so.
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Ok I would love to be a character
Pirate Name:Roger Sharkshot Pirate Notoriety: 46 Favorite Weapon: Grenade,Sword Fav Weapon Lvl:25,30 Personality:Grenades go BOOM yay a.k.a. likes explosive and is awesome Good or Evil?: good Other: oh and can I meet stealthy and other roger at the bar when they deliver the beer and play around with my character if you like he can be a little crazy or explosive crazy |
Sign me up!!
Sigh me up!! I would love to see where you take my character:laughks2:.
Pirate Name:Mr. Awesome. Pirate Notoriety: 32 Favorite Weapon: voodoo doll. Fav Weapon Lvl:25 Personality:Corrupt and twisted Good or Evil?: At the moment? Other: Is also amazing! I can be good or bad, whichever the story requires:laughks2: |
Oh yay more sign-ups. :D Mr. Awesome, I am definitely going to find use for your character, and Roger, your useful too. With the sign-ups and stuff, I actually have some better ideas. So time to go write it.
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Chapter 2 is in the main thread, until Chapter 3 is made. Heres Chap. 1
Chapter 1 Beer beer and, more beer. As Roger Swordshot (Known as Roger) and his drunken friend Stealthy Cannoneer (known as Stealthy) were walking in Tortuga (well, Roger was walking, Stealthy was spinning around) something made Stealthy stop in his tracks. “I..... I smell BEER.” Stealthy said as if hypnotized. “MORE beer? My god, how drunk can you get before you pass out?!?” Roger exclaimed in despair. “I must has beer.” And Stealthy walked toward the port, oblivious to the British soldiers unloading a ship with beer. “Demoted to unloading, all because YOU let them pirates get the Black Pearl.” One guard said in disgust. “Me? Perhaps your forgetting about how YOU started the argument in the first place!” The other exclaimed. And they continued fighting, not even noticing Stealthy and Roger walk on to the ship. Who knew those clowns would be the ones “guarding” the beer ship. Roger thought silently to himself as he dragged Stealthy behind an empty box. Roger would have preferred to take all the guards out, but the ship might sink in the struggle, and Stealthy wouldn’t let him hear the end of THAT. Maybe this will be easy. Now, most of you have read at least a couple of books and know that saying anything like that is just asking for trouble. Which is exactly why at that moment, an unloader turned around abruptly, as if to say “I sense something to make harder.” “Hey! Get off this ship pirates!” The guard yelled, drawing a musket. Why do they say that, and then block the entrance so we CAN’T get out? Roger thought annoyed as he drew his favorite sword, Thunderspine. “You prates will pay for mocking us! Charge!” The leader yelled, and the British charged. When did we mock them? Roger thought, and pointed his sword at the charging army. The sword charged with electric energy, and fired a bolt of lightning at the army. It blasted them off their feet, and out the door. “Easy. Wait.... where’s Stealthy?” Roger looked around the ship, and eventually found Stealthy pushing a pile of four crates of beers. “Must.... *huff* have...... *huff* beer.......” “Your obsessed, you know that?” “Must.....-” “Yeah yeah, tell you what, I’ll help you push the beer if we go to the bar and give some to them.” “If by give, you mean sell, then sure.” Stealthy said. “Oh, NOW the beer wears off!” Roger exclaimed angrily. Stealthy had been drunk so many times that hangovers had no effect on him. "What beer?” Stealthy asked, bewildered. “Oh my-” Roger didn’t finish the sentence, he just tried to strangle the air, which is going to get you nowhere. After Roger’s little fit, they went to go deliver the beer. NOTE: Chapter 2 is relatively long, cause I just had a spark of inspiration. Oh well. |
Come on people, post! I don't want to be writing this story for nobody. xD
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It was pretty funny mate!
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Awesome I like explosion you should get more attention because you are a really good writer.
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Just a thought... When are you updating? :D :D:D:D:D:D
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Nice story, matey! I may be a newbie on the forums but I do love reading and writing!
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Sorry guys, but action scenes are just NOT my thing. I seriously stink at 'em. Chapters should come out more often after this scene. Also cause school and homework get in the way too. Mostly the first reason though.
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I love how this isn't archived yet, I plan to get chapters out more often. I started this, so I plan to see it through. Expect more chapters soon!
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Sorry for double post, but just finished the belated chapter. xD This is the old one, new one's i the OP.
Chapter 2 Playing with explosives After lugging all four crates of beer to the bar, Roger and Stealth were exhausted. “*huff* So, *huff* why do we *huff* always *huff* bring the *huff* beer here? *huff*” Stealthy asked. Roger caught his breath, then replied: “Because if we didn’t there would be no more beer left after you get there.” Roger said rolling his eyes. “Oh yeah.” Stealthy said with a lack of bashfulness. Then he looked shocked and horrified. He turned to Roger and asked: “Hey, am I drunk or-” “Drunk.” Roger said, not really paying attention. Stealthy narrowed his eyes at Roger, and turned his head to the sea. “Look there and tell me you don’t see Jolly Roger’s ship.” “I don’t see Jolly Roger’s ship.” “Uh.... maybe I AM drunk.” “No, I see it, I was just following orders.” Roger got a punch for that one. “But, why is he here?” Roger asked, paying full attention now. If this an invasion they were toast, only them and one other person was there. “Yeah, ask the beer addict something a regular person can’t figure out, that makes sense.” Stealthy said sarcastically. I almost prefer you crazy over beer then this. Roger thought to himself. Then, the drawbridge of the ship lowered, and out walked Jolly himself. OK, this is definitely not an invasion. What the heck is going on? Jolly stepped off, and narrowed his eyes at Roger, and started walking toward the bar. “Come on! We shall protect the beer at all costs!” Stealth said, dragging Roger toward Jolly. Not very stealthy, are you? “Move pirates, I’ll collect your souls soon enough.” Jolly commanded. “You. No hurt beer. Leave now.” “Mates, I’ll be destroying that bar wether you get in my way or not.” Jolly replied as he waved his hand. “No!” Too late, the bar exploded behind them. “Wow, dude, I like explosions too, but thats a little overboard!” The random pirate said. “All that beer....... gone.” Stealthy said. “YOU MONSTER!!!!!” How is he mad about the beer but NOT about the people? Stealthy took out his blunderbuss, the random pirate held a Firebomb in each hand, and Roger drew Thunderspine. “I did not come to treat with worms” Jolly said. Winds wrapped around him, and he was gone, his ship with him. Roger started to head for his own boat, when out of the ground came a pirate, someone Roger had never seen before. “Who are you?” Roger asked. “That.... is none of your concern.” The pirate replied with an evil grin. Roger decided it was best to be cautious, and pointed Thunderspine at the pirate. “Aw what a pity, and here I thought we could be friends” The pirate sighed. Roger didn’t respond, didn’t even blink. “Alright then, don’t say I didn’t warn you.” The pirate drew a blood red sword, and launched himself at Roger. |
Writing this and the next chapter at the same time. xD Please post and criticize, unless it has something to do with the unbalanced post rate, in which case, I know. It's annoying. I say I'll post it in a week, it gets posted in a month or two. Bye peoples!
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New chappie going to be posted in a few seconds, here's the old one.
Chapter 3 The extremely belated fight scene The evil pirate jumped up with sword in hand, planning to flatten Roger into the ground. He dodged, then countered with a jab. The enemy deflected it, swept roger off his feet, and kicked him into a wall. Then he just walked slowly, taking his time, knowing Roger couldn’t do anything but lie on the ground. Uhm, guys, saving me right about now would be really great....... As if he could hear Roger, the unknown pirate hurled Firebombs, Smoke bombs, and regular bombs at the enemy, setting him on fire and blinding him, while Stealthy shot multiple loads using Quick Shot. Why does he not look hurt? Roger wondered. For a good reason, too. Despite all the effort put into hurting him, then enemy was barely scratched. Kind of like jumping off a cliff and the only damage done is a paper cut size cut on your back. Roger picked himself up, and decided that brute force wouldn’t work, so he drew a saber in place of Thunderspine. Stealthy, thinking the same thing, traded his blunderbuss for dual pistols. “Guess I’ll have to change, too.” The bomber sad kind of sadly. He packed his bombs and instead took out a voodoo doll. He attuned Roger and Stealthy, and stood back and let them do the fighting while he healed them. Using this strategy, the trio was eventually able to wear the enemy down. He collapsed in exhaustion, panting. “You’ve brought this on yourselves, time to stop playing.” He muttered, and he got up, raised his sword, and plunged it into the ground. Moments later, Roger could feel his life draining, the strength that made him defeat the enemy, all gone. The other two felt similar effects. How did he manage to do that? It’s almost as if....... he used the Life Drain skill! This final thought filled Roger with dread, and he looked horror stricken. The pirate just smiled. “You get it now, don’t you?” The pirate asked rhetorically, malice in his eyes. “Time for a little fun.” and suddenly the trio was on fire, cursed, blinded, they had just about every negative status effect on them. Then, they were attacked by what felt like millions of bees. With the final thought: I wonder why this guy doesn’t have a girlfriend...... Roger was knocked unconscious. |
Quadruple post... o.o' Sorry. But I want SOME comments. xD Someone please post so I'm not just writing this for me and this wall over here.
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