The Pirate Life Begins...
 

I had another thread on my beginning, but I made a new outline on my story plot so here it is.

Chapter 1
My Beginning

I was a young kid, not a pirate at all. My father was a ship worker and he taught me everything to know about ships.

We transported cargo to other people on the high seas but one day, everything turned horrible.

We were sailing through dangerous territory of the EITC, to transport some fresh cargo on our war frigate. When all of a sudden a mist comes through and the juggernaut was right in it.

The juggernaut was ready for battle, and sunk us in a clear explosive shot. We were no match for it. The last thing I saw was my father go overboard. I never saw him again.

I woke up in some sort of jail cell and there is this man with dreadlocsk. I later learned he was Jack Sparrow and he helped me up. He told me that I look horrible but then he helped me get out. He kicked the jail door and then let me free, I had a debt and I knew I had to repay it.

I walk over to Captain Bo beck's ship and he said he's here to transport me to Port royal. After grabbing a cannona nd sinking a skeleton ship. A man named JOlly Roger came. Bo Becka nd Jolly argued for a little until Jolly Grabbed Bo beck and turned him into a skeleton.

He then said " Dead men tell no tales, so I'm forcd to let ye live " but then he dispatched me of asword I had no idea was there, and threw me overboard. swam to Port Royal seeing the ship sink under flames and thunder.

I swam up there and I see a sign with a sword on it. I think that is a blacksmith shop so I walk into it and ask a man by the name of Phillip Fuller if he could let me have a sword for free. He then said no, but after much bargaining he gave me a rusty cutlass for free.

I walk over to some sort of eerie cemetary, and a dagger whistles next to my head. I look where it came from and it was a grotesque skeleton. As it gets read to throw another dagger I unsheathe my sword, parry the dagger throw and start to hack at it. It was an eternity before I thought this was over.

Then after hacking and slashing it falls back, turns into some sort of green soul and disappears. What I see in front of me is some sort of chest with a skull on it. As I open it I find a sword, a sword called the bloodfire cutlass. As I try to slash with it it gave a burning sensation, it seems I can hold but not attack with it.

That somehow put me into rage, I took out my rusty cutlass and started to slash at every skeleton at the cemetary. I then calmed down and saw an opening in here. I walk into it and meet a lady named tia dalma. A strange one she is.

She said " You have a touch of destiny in you " And then gave me acompass, a compass that points to whatever I want most. She then mentioned my debt with the man back at the jail, and she told me to repay the debt I must get releaser forms for the black Pearl froma navy soldier.

I wondered if I should help this man to get revenge for my father, or just give up now and continue my father's work. What should I do, two sides of fate tempting me but only one way to go....

Nice job mate. I can't wait to hear the rest!

awesome story! i agree cant wait for the rest!

Thank you for the review on the first chapter, as we know I am getting into a load of trouble, either door a or door b. Want to know what happens next? Just read on.

Chapter 2
A Lost Wish

Two sides of fate tempting me.... one way to go. I had no idea what to do yet so I decided to continue going on with this debt to pay back until I was sure I could keep going or head back.

As I stride outside the cemetery I see a navy cadet. The navy cadet starts slashing at me while I walk by.

I start to parry and lunge, thrusting and hacking and then I got the finishing blow. He fell backwards and his face turned pale. I felt nothing, they did this to my father and I will do it back to them.

I found the release orders and then I was to head to the Governor's Mansion. It was guarded by cadets which I found amusing because of how easy they were to defeat.

One by one I went into a fury rage until every cadet was gone, and on the ground pale. I unsheathed my sword and went inside the Mansion. She said that I must find Jack Sparrow, and that she is awaiting her father's return. She would not join me.

I was told to see Darby Drydocks in order to get a ship. As I'm walking by the gypsy cart I see a potion table. I wondered if I should make any. I asked the gypsy, Lucinda if I should and she said that there was something in me. Try a few potions and see if the fates will let you master.

As I throw in ingredients into my bowl I make a potion, the swashbuckler stew I. This increases your sword attack said Lucinda. I said thank you and left to go to Darby Drydock's.

As I head over there I almost fell on the ground, there on the shore was my father's ship but in devasting state, as I run over and ask Darby on how that ship came, he said that it was in bad shape when it landed onto shore here. He would fix it later. I then said ' Is there anyway to fix it quicker? " Then he mentioned something about repairing it by hitting some nails, plugging leaks and getting water out of there.

I then boarded my ship and did what I was told, in about an hour it was freshly repaired waiting to be sailed. As I walk into my cabin to take a good night's sleep I see a note out of the tip of my eye.

Dear son,

If you ever see this note, then it means that I have passed away. I wish you with this ship.
Also, I wish that you get revenge on the EITC ship that has killed me. Get revenge on every last one of them for my last wish.

Love,
Father

As I stared at it I had no idea what happened. I keep reading it over and yet I still did not know what to do. Was I going to risk my life in order to fulfill my father's wishes. Or was I going to try to make a good living at Port Royal with a home. I still did not know. I went to sleep thinking......
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Ok that's Chapter Two, a lost wish. Any review are apperciated and don't be afraid to criticize!

Comments and review are appreciated, I posted kind of late so nobody could see it on recent threads and please don't hold back.

Nobody is perfect, so there is always room to improve and strive perfection.

Darn, I'll have to subscribe to this so I can see the posts.

Nice job on keeping it real mate! I like how you're incorporating all of the newer stuff as well. It makes a great connection back to the game.

wub it!! imma read more! KEEP IT COMING -RAWR LOL -

Thank you very much for the review on here. I appreciate it dearly. Chapter 3 has begun. What will become of me? Well find out below

Chapter 3
A Deadly Gaze

As I wake up I find myself on the shores of Tortuga. I see Devil's Anvil across the ocean and start to become furious at myself.

I must have not strapped the sails down before I went to sleep last night. A careless mistake that I would not let happen again.

I walk down the dock and see that the sky is turning a tinge green. Very very strange indeed in what is happening. As I begin to ask a fellow mate or two on what the color means they did not know as well.

I walk up to a gypsy and ask her what the sky is doing. She introduced herself, Fabiola and told me that there is a curse about to happen. Head indoors before this minute strikes!

I took heed of her warning and ran inside King's Arm. I hear then a strange rumbling sound and then gunshots being fired. I decided to go outside. I look at the moon and see the same man I saw on the ship: Jolly Roger.

I look around and see millions of skeletons fighting the human townsfolk and trying to defeat them. I see skeletons and people falling left and right being taken to jail and then a skeleton swung at me.

I quickly parried and disarmed him. He took out a sword on fire. He then started swinging at me and I had to be very agile in order to dodge this. After what seemed like an hour I then got the sword out of his hand and on the tavern door..

I then swing and finish him off with a stab. He fell back and then disappeared. It seemed that killing the skeletons will stop the curse Fabiola was speaking of. I then started to run into the mob with the sword on door. As I took it out the broadsword started to go fire and then I dashed into that mob with all my fury.

I was swerving left and right dodging pistol fires and a swinging of swords. I got skeletons left and right and by the time I was at the dock most of the skeletons were down. Then disaster happened...

As a huge grenade lands next to me I take a huge ammount of damage to my body. I am almost down and as I look up I see a skeleton with a huge grenade in his hand. He throws another and luckily I get out of the way and it only blows some wood up off the dock and also hitting some skeletons making them disappear.

Then another fellow pirate hit the skeleton in the back and finished him off, making him disappear as well.

Then in an instance the curse was over. There were no more green skies or skeleton pirates. As quickly as it begun, it ended even quicker. As I stride over to fabiola and ask her what happened she told me this:

" That was 'The Curse Of The Muertos Moon,' a deadly curse Joly Roger has done to try to take over the caribbean. anybody caught in that deadly gaze will be turned into a skeleton, and then only turned back to human by being defeated in battle."

She then mentioned a few things about being indoors or on a ship to avoid the effects and that this can only happen during the tides are right, near Hallow's Eve. Hallow's Eve was ending tomorrow and I was glad for that. Never had I felt the sheer terror and adrenaline in my whole entire life.

I got back onto my ship and started to set sail again, to Devil's Anvil to meet somebody I was told to meet. The journey continued, and I was th eperson leading the journey, my own choices and my own fate will guide me all the way, whter death or freedom it is time to find out the truth, whether now or never.
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And that is Chapter 3. Pretty exciting eh? Review appereciated, please don't hold back and I hope I'll se you again in a week or so for Chapter 4!

I agree mate, very exciting. The detail was very good and I liked the way you described the fighting. It's interesting how you brought the Muertos moon into this too. Also, it's amusing how you got to Tortuga first, haha.

However, there was this one point at the beginning that kind of confused me.

It seems kind of odd and awkward. I got what you were saying, but maybe go back and edit it a little.

Ok sorry I didn't make that clear I was actually in a rush before I had to go so I edited it, should be clearer now.

Ok I decided to post another chapter really quick on here. I am probably going to release chapters with different time frames so if I take a long time I apologize ahead of time. Thanks for the review and here is CHAPTER 4!

Chapter 4
The Code, a man, and a surprise

As I wake up I see the sun's early gaze on the horizon. I start to yawn and then go to the bar of King's Arm to find something to drink.

I then said " Hey Johnny! Fetch me some water! " He then stared at me like I had three heads. I dropped about a 100 gold and he rushed to get some water.

I then sat down and then a new person spoke to me. Andrew Bowdash. He asked if I was going onto the seas today and I said aye.

He then said " Lookie here mate, beware the seas today as there are rumors that powerful EITC or Navy fleets will be launched. You can recognize them with a special Insignia on there sails. The EITC war frigates are Tyrants and the Navy's are Elites. They have a powerful ship of the line that I've hard the docksmen are working on building. They ship of the lines are packed full of power with explosives. Take heed of the warning mate."

I then said " Thanks " and went to get my water and walked back to my ship. To Devil's Anvil I supposed. I then unstrapped the sails and started to head back to Devil's Anvil.

After a few hours or so I finally hit the island. I threw an anchor aboard and jumped off of my ship. When I unsheathed my firy sword or my broadsword I could not wield it once more, the burning sensation was back.

Then from nowhere I feel a sharp sting on my back. I turn around to see a huge scorpion lunging for another attack. I parry and slice off the pincer disarming it. But then it started to use its arms.

I sliced those off and then did the final blow, a stab right to the neck. It then also dropped a pouch and as I untied it I found a playing card. A nine of spades.

I then saw animals to my left, scorpions and crabs, and a cave straight ahead of me. I decided to go straight and venture into this unknown cave.

As I walk in a man a strange man said this. " Ye are going to need more than that cutlass if you want to get out of here with yer skin. Now lets see how good you are with the hand cannon. Go ahead shoot at that cursed simian. "

As I catch the pistol barely pulling off the trigger I then turned to the monkey. It showed no signs of being scared. As I check if it is loaded i then fire and a kick came to it. Almost knocking me into the water in this Grotto.

The monkey did not do anything or want to do anything. It climbed back up on the man's shoulders.

He also said this " Now before you go firing at every reckless person in sight a word of warning about The Code. It does not only say the rules but it also says the rules of engagement. Steal from 'em, plunder 'em, torture 'em, burn 'em but no guns! That is unless ye be facing a cursed pirate. An undead pirate does not follow the rules of engagement allowing you to fire upon him. Now goodbye... "

Strangely one moment I was in there, the next walking out the cave. It was weird this caribbean was but strangely I was actually feeling good to feel the rush of excitement and adrenaline. To Tortuga now. I must find the man who helped me out of jail.

He is the only way that I will probably be able to get revenge. As I set sail once more more mist appears, and then I saw it. It was there right before my eyes the same ship.... that had killed my father, and it was right there in front of me.....
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Not the most exciting chapter I agree but it's a buildup for a very special chapter. So I"ll post chapter 5 soon i nabout a week or less. Just keep a lookout, thanks for the review Crest by the way :D. Please by all means comment and enjoy reading!

As Tepcat once said to me, the chapter doesn't need to be exciting for it to be good (or something along those lines...). The buildup makes the more adventurous parts even more exciting because there's more depth to it. Very nice job mate.

Alright sorry bout not posting in a while. Had finals to study for and etc. Here is chapter 5!

Chapter 5
Recreation of Destruction

I see the ship and I am just flabbergasted at what I see. Then I snapped back to the real world and began my journey back to Tortuga. Surely I would need a crew to sink these powerful ships. The last time without a crew, we sunk quickly and they showed no mercy.

I sail over there at full speed and finally dock right at Tortuga. For some reason the docks are on flames and then all of a sudden the tavern, King's Arm exploded with all of its fury into shambling pieces.

I ran into the town trying to figure out why in the world is there explosions going on in the pirate home: Tortuga?! I ran into a man muttering this. "The EITC, the EITC, run the EITC have come to destroy the islands!"

I then did what no man should have did. I ran into the town with my full fury and rage. I was corrupted with revenge and took out my bloodfire cutlass which strangely turned on fire without that burning sensation once more. It was peculiar when I think back on when this occurred.

I run in there and see explosives set everywhere. And by a peculiar coincidence I see barrels, not just any gunpowder barrels but the EITC symbol onto the barrels. I then began to scream in my mind. But I would not give up and let this happen.

As I see faithful Bride being blown up I try to open up that door. It would not budge. I kicked and kicked again and then finally it seemed to pop open and all of these flames of wood and EITC gunpowder barrels where left in front of me.

I see James Pidgeley in danger and I run to help him. James then muttered, " The wretched EITC have set explosives to rid of us pirates, save yourself!," I screamed " No, I'm not leaving behind anybody! " I then get him walking with me and then the roof just collapsed right in front of me!

I then started to wonder how in the Caribbean are we supposed to get out of here now. James then told me that there was some gunpowder stored in the storage room. Go get it and set it on the collapsed rubble.

I ran into there and got the gunpowder which was safely put in barrels. I ran and put the barrel right in front of the rubble, lit it and took cover.

BOOM went the gunpowder sending the rubble into a thousand miniature pieces and sending shrapnel everywhere. Surprisingly none of the shrapnel hit us with our luck. Only this was just our only piece of luck I later learn.

We both run out and I tell James to run to the beach and board somebody's ship. " You need to go James, I'll stay back and help any other people stuck in this chaos " James then said " You're a great pirate Dog, and you have a greater heart, you'd make a true first mate and a true pirate. " As he walks away another explosion happens and then everything went in a flash.

Doc Grog's exploded, and then Millie's Cottage along with all of the other buildings. The blacksmiths and the gunsmith's shops were blown up in the action. In the blur of smoke I see the one thing I didn't expect to see.

I saw an EITC soldier carrying around a gunpowder barrel and he was setting it on fire. Not today I thought. I found a dagger right at my feet. I took aim with percision and through it right at the EITC soldier. It caught him right in the leg, he fell and was never, ever seen again.

I then saw other buildings go up in smoke and then I knew that it was too late for Tortuga, the hideout of Pirates. I knew it was its time to cease to exist. As I run to the beach I see Tortuga clearing the smoke and in shambles. But what I see is the strangest thing ever.

I see EITC soldiers and then some of the dockworkers and blacksmiths along with other townsfolk rebuildings this town back together.

" Maybe it isn't time for the Hideout of Pirates to end " I said. And along with that I ran back onto my ship and took refuge as the exlosions continued and shrapnel flew everywhere. I may have missed the ships that killed my father but at least i live another day to try to get vengeance on those ships.

They will pay is what I thought in my mind. I later learned that this was much different from the truth. As I start to set sail, I see the mist clearing and a new Tortuga coming out of the ground, a new Hideout for the pirates.


Tortuga the Hideout of Pirates, has been rebuilt, and its dignity? Well we'll have to see what happens next to answer that question...
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Chapter 5 is done. Pretty exciting as I put the new and old back together in one exciting event eh? stay tuned for chapter 6!

I'm hooked....
 

Dog I had to leave off commenting til I got my fill....but I want more!:)

Passages like show a depth to your talent mate.

Keep em coming!:TrainersBullet:

Awesome Dog! I had to read the other chapters, and they are great! I will definitely stay tuned for this.

Very good once again, Dog! I liked this part to be honest-

OMINOUS! haha. Nice job mate, can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Here's chapter 6!

Chapter 6
El Patron

As the mist clears of the shrapnel and the dust from the explosions I see a new Tortuga. A new pirate hideout for all pirates to enjoy for festivities, drink rum, and the one place to hide from the Numskull Navy, Evil EITC, and the stupid Skeletons.

As I start to walk in I see the Faithful Bride rebuilt and all up and busy once more. It seems that it never even happened. There's Joshamee playing some cards with his fellow crew and James serving some more rum.

I walk over to Joshamee to ask what happened. Here's what he told me:

Ahoy Dog! It seems that the EITC have set gunpowder explosives to destroy us pirates! Lord Beckett won't stop until he rids of us pirates, and is the ruler of the Caribbean. But we pirates are strong, word has it that new legendary weapons are held deep withint Padres del Fuego, or the Father of Fire. The general, General Darkhart holds the legendary weapon. A weapon far stronger than that fire sword of yours.

I then unsheathe my cutlass and surprisingly nothing happens, no burning sensation. Then WOOSH the blade goes onto flames.

Joshamee then continues:

Word has it that the General holds the Lost Sword of El Patron. El Patron is a conquistador. A legendary conquistador. Legend has it that he had the most powerful weapons ever to be in the Caribbean. El Patron or The Conquistador held his weapons over at Padres Del Fuego. Jolly Roger wants those weapons, as well as Beckett. When you arrive you will see that the EITC and JOlly Roger will be set up digging deep into the caves. He wants the weapons, they both do and they won't stop until they get El Patron's weapons. Beware on your journey mate, beware! Alas tis I hope that you make it back and I hope that fair winds find ye!

I started to shout for a crew and then I began my Journey, the Journey to the Father of Fire...
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Short chapter yes... but I"m planning to release another before my vacation. Fair winds for now!

Nice chapter mate! Short, but good.

Keep 'em coming mate.

HAhaha, nice alliteration mate.

It's a good chapter. You captured Gibbs well, and I like how you translated the Spanish phrases. I think it's a good background chapter, and I know that there can only be bigger and better things coming! Nice job.

I want to get another 2 chapters out before I go on vacation. Thanks for the reviews also. They mean a lot to me.

Chapter 7
The Eeerie Mist and the Followers

I learned that all of these bilge rats were not in capable condition to head to Padres Del Fuego, or the Father of Fire.

I ask Joshamee if there is any safe way to get to Padres Del Fuego, without a crew aboard.

Aye Dog there is! Head to the docks of Tortuga and there's a man who be with some boxes and workin' on 'em. Ask him to help you stowaway to Padres Del Fuego. He will transport you, for a price that is. That is a safe way to get there. I suggest you catch some sleep while you are in say box. Here use this gold doubloon to transport you there.

I thank him once more for the info and start to run to the man who could help me. I see a man on the docks and ask him if he could transport me to Padres.

Here's what he said:

Aye mate, but ye better pay up for a price to transport you there safely. That gold doubloon in your hand should fetch nicely.

I gave him the gold.

Hop into the box. And have a good time while being shipped over seas...

I hop in and get boxed in. A few minutes later I feel the bouncing of the cargo wihch is me, being transported onto a ship. I might as well have caught some shut eye so I did. I saw the darkness envelop my eyes and I fell asleep...






I wake up.... tired and groggy but I here an anchor make a sploosh sound. I see hte cargo being transported to another similar man. He took out the nails and bolts and let me out. Well go ahead and enjoy Padres young one.

I ask him if he knew anything about the legendary weapons. He said this:

Oh yes I know of them. That sword of yours is one of 'em. But there is a legendary sword, the Lost Sword of El Patron. A sword so powerful it is said that the holder could take over the Caribbean. JOlly Roger and Beckett both want these weapons and if they do get the sword, and the plunder along with it, the Caribbean and piracy will be lost for now... and forever.

All of a sudden an eerie, green, ghastly and ghostly mist just comes out of nowhere and envelops the town. He then muttered this:

Arr! Jolly Roger is coming! This mist is a symbol of his invasion for this island! If we don't stop him he will retrieve the weapons and doom us all! We must be strong and defeat him! They will come, in about 5 minutes by the looks of this mist. Go get your weapons ready and here use this gold doubloon to get you a nice pistol at that store right there.

I thank him and run over to the gunsmith store and open the door. I run and ask if I can buy a pistol. The gunsmith says that he could give a tri-barrel pistol for that gold doubloon in your hand.

I give him the gold doubloon and he gives me a nice, heavy repeater pistol. I load some ammo into it and run out the door. The mist is darker, and it is getting much more damper and difficult to see.

I see townsfolk putting up barrels and pieces of wood. I asked a man on what they're doing. I learned that his name was Oliver and here's what he told me:

They're putting up barricades to repel the invaders, other known as the Undead Skeletal Army of Jolly Roger. These will hold them back, but if they fall then they will get deeper into town. If they get to the town walls, and destroy it then they shall retrieve said weapons and use them to take over the Caribbean. At least that's what rumor states. Be ready mate!

The mist gets even darker.

It gets even harder to see through all of this mist. I mutter a few words and start asking Oliver if there are any tips he said on what I should do when they invade.

First Invasion eh? Well no biggy, first time for everything. A few tips are that there are 7 waves of skeletons. There are many that come and with each incoming wave the enemies get much more difficult. If said skeletons were to destroy a barricade, then they go deeper into the town. The barricades can pause them, but eventually they will fall.

I then said "How do we eventually pull off the skeletons and make them leave port, keeping this town safe?"

Alright mate be patient let me finish. After the final wave of enemies or brigades some call it Jolly Roger will come. He wants to get the weapons himself and do it himself, seeing his comrades and minions fall to us, what he thinks are such pitiful pirates. We need to get ready for the battle mate. Because if we don't, then all hope is lost.

I said, " So how powerful is Jolly Roger?"

Oliver laughs.

How poerful is he? He's invaded this island much more than a couple of times. He has unlimited voodoo power and will strike down all in his way. We have many pirates ready at the guns and having sharpened blades to defeat him and hold him back. Be strong mate be strong. Now go get ready for the invasion! We have near a minute till this commences!

I start to hurry off and I see the mist is almost impossible to see through. The mis tand its followers hmm...

Oh and one more thing! Watch out for skeletons carrying barrels! They pack a punch...

Is the last thing I hear in the distance.

Then I see a ship. An undead ship by the looks of it. And lightning is in the distance with it.

I hear a voice. By the sound of it it is Jolly Roger's voice. I could barely hear him but he said this.

Attack!!!

I see undead rise from the murky waters from the dock I am standing on. I see rotten rascals of the undead armada rising to come take the weapons. I see all of these at the same time as pirates are shooting their pistols, and dulling their blades with skeletal bone impacts.

Everybody is trying to impede there process, but we all know that he will come no matter what. All of us know that Jolly Roger will come to the island and try to destroy us all.

Padres Del Fuego must be saved, as well as El Patron's Weapon Cache. If not then what will become of Padres Del Fuego. What will become of piracy if he or Beckett gets ahold of these weapons?

only time will tell, but first of all, I have an invasion to finish...
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Well that is chapter 7! I hope you all enjoyed this! Get ready for the next chapter!

Chapter 8
Invasion

I have an invasion to finish...

The undead rise as well as the mist which is impeding many of the pirates' progress.

This is bad I thought to myself but it does not mean we can not trump! The mist and these mere skeletons can't stop us!

The Undead Pirates rise and start to commence a battle with us. One of them swung at me and I unsheathed my flaming sword and took a slash at him.

He parried and tried to get a lunge at me while I dodge with lightning speed and slash at the neck, hitting and disintergrating him into thin air. But, that was only the start.

Skeletons continued to rise from the murky waters and the hard grael of dirt and us pirates continued to fend them off.

Two Undead Pirates then swung at me at the same time. I duck and swing upwards and disarm one of the skeletons, cutting of his wrist and do a double spin cut. Decapitating both of the skeletons and turning them into bone dust, then disintergration.

Then Jolly Roger said:

Destroy these pirates and their pitiful barricades! Attack! Attack!!!

I see voodoo witchdoctors rise as well as more pirates. I throw a sword right at the witchdocto'rs bony neck.

It catches the witchdoctor right in the neck and it fell backwards landing on the hard gravel. Then all of a sudden, out of the eerie mist I see a skeleton carryinga big barrel with him.

Could that be a barrel just like at the Tortuga explosions? I decided to backup at sight and disarm another skeleton stealing his sword as well. I throw my stolen sword with precision and accuracy right at the gunpowder brrel and hit it right on the dot.

Gunpowder starts to leak from the barrel. I see a chance and then I run over to the leaking gunpowder and the skeleton with the gunpowder several feet away, putting me out of the blast radius.

I see no pirates around so I take out my fire sword and swing it right at the gunpowder. It runs on flames and heads straight to the skeleton.

When it hit the skeleton, all chaos was let loose from the barrel and sharpanel was flying everywhere. The skeleton turned into bone dust, and was never seen again and as well with the explosion, a wall of fire envelopped all of the skeletons and created a new defense against the skeletons.

Every skeleton rising and touching the flames was quickly taken down.

Then Jolly Roger's voice comes and tells his next wave to come, Wave 3.

I see more enemies and dual cutlass enemeis start to rise. I start to run into the crowd of enemies with my fury, rage and surprisingly my wits at the same time. I cut through the wall of fire with my flaming sword with all chaos let loose form it and swing at the dual weilders with all my power.

I take each one down shortly but I hear an explosion. I see a barricade right near us turn into shrapnel. I start to panic as I see Jolly Roger right there in the distance...

He's knocking everybody out and is destroying every barricade. He uses a lightning bolt to take down the barricade next to me in one shot.

So here it is,... Jolly Roger right there... I must defeat him... I must defeat him!!!
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There's the chapters for you. HOpe you had fun!

Wow! Nice details mate! You made everything visual, especially the part with the mist.

Have a good vacation mate!

Read up Del... :P

I like how you are always able to incorporate what has happened in the game into your story, such as with the invasions or the stowaways. Your detail is good. The imagery you have during the invasions is excellent. I do feel that if it had been the first time Jolly had invaded Padres, it could have been better. It was still great though. I can't believe you're leaving for a month and ending it there......:( ah well. Nice job!

Chapter 9
Duel

Jolly Roger right in front of me, with the place smelling of smoke and hundreds of pirates down. If they didn't stop him, then how could I? I take a peek at him while having most of my body still protected by the rock and I see his body.

A grotesque man, made of bone with a combination weapon in one hand being his hand and a hat with playing cards on it. He had a sword sheathed along with it and his coat being dirty and stained. He was the man on evil, and I was the only one left to defeat him.

I was terrified at that specificied moment but I knew what I had to do. Defeat him, or have him defeat me, along with the town and the end of Padres and stuff, but that wasn't on my mind.

I unsheathed BOTH my bloodfire cutlass and mt bloodfire broadsword each turning to flames the second they touched the air.

I ran, screaming with all of my rage and fury, going directly toward him.

Jolly turns around startled but quick with his wits and does something I didnt expect at all. He summoned a tornado of cursed souls around him, and apparently me with it.

Surprisingly it did NOTHING at all, to me, shocking Jolly Roger and giving me the window of opportunity to take a slash at him.

I slashed at his leg chipping of bone, not doing much but still making his leg collapse to the ground having him scream this:

Gah! Impossible! Immune to my powers! I am no simpleton fool, I know you have voodoo on your side, but from who is my question! No matter, we shall duel to the death then!!!

He took a swipe at me with his armlet combination which knocked me back a few feet. He then started to look angry and summoned a lightning bolt to meet me.

It does nothing, nothing at all to me.

He screams this:

Gah, you may be immune to voodoo, but how do you fair with explosives, fool!

He waves his arm in the air and surrounding him are four powder keg runners. I start to panic and went to hide behind my rock once again.

You fool! These keg runners will destroy you if you even come close to me!

I had to figure something out. I see a pistol right there a few feet in front of the rock but I knew that Jolly was just waiting. If I could take the pistol and shoot the keg, it should cause a chain reaction to blow everyone and cause some harm to Jolly.

I make a run for the pistol dashing with all my strength to obtain it. I grab it with no harm and try to shoot it.

I press the trigger, aiming carefully but nothing came out. I clicked it once more.

Nothing.

I look inside and see no bullet in there. I made a mistake.

A costly mistake.

The powder keg was right next to me but I think quick wits took over, because I take out my sword in a flash.

In another his Powder Keg Arm fell to the ground with the powder keg safely falling and I hack the skeleton into tiny pieces.

JOlly looks shocked.

I find on the ground a bullet. A bullet that was right next to the pistol.

How was I not able to see it? No matter I slide it in and shoot, hitting my target spot on. The kegs start a chain reaction, destroying one and causing the others to explode. Shrapnel flies everywhere and smoke starts to blind me. I smell lost bones of the skeletons along with this smoke dulling my reactions and senses, making me kneel on a foot.

As the smoke clears I see Jolly kneeling on a foot as well. That sight gave me strength and courage. I stand up and turn both swords on fire. I run at him, screaming and stab right through the place where a man's heart would be, I hear several cracks go off and Jolly screaming.

Rah!!!!

Jolly says this:

You boy have power, power that I must have! The next time we meet it will not be so easy. Prepare for death the next time, and the torment of serving me in the afterlife! Mwahahaha!!!

A green aura starts to emit from him and was circling around him swiftly and freely. It started to get dense and then he was entirely covered in this aura.

The aura started to give way and when I had a clear sight, he was gone.

I hear a cannon blast in the distance. I then realize it's the sound of his ship's cannon. I leap to my left and look back.

An explosion comes and I see smoke billowing from where I was standing only moments ago. A close call.

When the smoke clears I see a paper, I pick it up and read it. It had words on it, words to a riddle of some sort.

The Father of Fire holds no power
To make anybody cower
Yet one man knows where true power is
The power he could use to make it his
He can fly away at times of trouble
Even when the enemy is tis near in winning
Finding this man be no easy task
And doing so may cause sadness, and regret.
True power shall come, along with a price.
If there was no price then there is no reward...


That's what the riddle said. I was stumped at to what it meant. I just didn't get it. If I kept going would I find something I'd regret? Who knows... who knows...
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What does the riddle mean? I'm giving a chance for readers to take a guess as to what it means. The next chapter MIGHT say what it means, but no hints will come until the chapter is released. What will happen next...?

I think that I posted a tad early in the morning for no one to see. Just posting to make sure everybody has a chance to read this.

BUMP New chapter coming soon.

Ok, ok, finally made it. Sorry it took so long! Now, about this chapter...

I like the description of the battle and the twist where you are immune to his voodoo. The way you made the chain reaction with the Kegs was smart. When Jolly leaves, it's very foreboding, which is good. It keeps me interested. It was kind of amusing how you didn't see the bullet on the ground right next to the gun, haha. A little humor in the middle of serious. A few grammar errors, but nothing big. Nice job mate!

Great story dog!

Thanks for the reviews. Here is chapter 10.

Chapter 10
A Spirit's Call

This riddle was something to me. I had only figured out the first part of the clue, Padres had nothing to help me. It had nothing at all. It did have a man on it, a man who can find the treasure trove and take over the world. THe question is who, and where.

I decide that I should walk around to get my muscles warmed up for the journey to come next. I needed to be ready for the next challenge I'm going to face. I stride and walk past Ratskellar, a tavern of high stakes where many play, some win it big, and some lose it all. Nothing of my concern I told myself.

As I walk by I have the ground shaking beneath my feet, I'm startled and shocked, and turn to look at the volcano right in my face erupting with the rage and fury of which seemed like a war inside a volcano full of pirates. The magma was errupting but only a little amount. All of which emptying into lava pools and rivers that criss-cross through the caves of Padres, haunted with the evil spirits.

As I turn around I see a green fog, a green smoke radiating energy right there in front of me. It seemed like a trifle compared to me but suddenly it got larger and bigger until a man stepped out, a man with dirty clothes, a brownish hat and boots dirty as well. He looked evil, and I could feel evil radiating from his very soul. So who was this man? Then he said:

So you're the fellow who fended of Roger all by ye self. You don't look like much, you look like some dirty bilge rat who's been playing in the swamp. A man like you could never be able to fend of Roger alone.

I felt anger boiling up inside of me. The rage just buildng up. I was mad at this man, but I had no idea who this man was. Who was he?

Wondering who i am boy? You should know if you live in the Caribbean! Guess your ears are as deaf as a stump's. I am Captain Ezekiel Rott, the most deadliest pirate in the Caribbean by that fact, and i'm here, to slay you for what you did to Roger you bilge rat!

He unsheathed his cutlass which had a strange glow from it. It looked like the color of gold, solidified into a sword of mystique powers. The sword was radiating the power so strong that I almost collapsed in front of it.

This sword here ain't your regular cutlass. It ain't in fact close to the power of your cutlass. My cutlass is special. It holds power that no sword has, not even the Lost Sword of El Patron you seek. Muahaha!!

I then spoke ENOUGH WITH YOUR FOOLISH TALKING AND LET'S JUST DUEL. I unsheathed my cutlass in the blink of the eye and in less then a second I was attacking, doing a thrust directly for his heart, with the flames already burning.

Rott knew I was about to do this, he parried in a second, and retaliated cutting me down in another, all he did was slice my left hand, just a scratch but the pain was horrible. It was the sheer pain alone that made me fall to the ground. It felt like a thousand needles were going in there at the same time, then coming out again in the blink of an eye in a repetitive process.

HA! You fool you should know to never strike me. This sword causes so much pain that you would collapse if I went any deeper. You fool, you should have never messed with Roger! You'll pay the consequences if you do!

He raised his cutlass, which glimmered brightly in the sun's light into my eyes and was about to take the finishing blow. Before making contact I gathered my wits, and my strength to knock him down with a sweep of both of my legs sideways causing his head to door of Ratskellar. I heard him grunt a few times and then he proceeded to get up. Which thankfully gave me enough time to get up and turn my sword on fire.

You can only stall your judgement. Nothing will save you. Padres is as dead as the back of it is. Everybody is knocked out, from Roger and you're the only one left. Don't think that help will suddenly come. You'd be a fool to think th-

Before he could finish the last word I swung at him and came cutting across his leg, finishing it and going for a returning wave slice, but he was quick enough and jumped it, landing on the blade with his feet causing it to go in the air, do spirals and land right in his hand.

You won't win, nothing will save you now, you should have realized that when you mess with Roger, you ain't getting away, and that's final.

I took out my other sword, it was heavier as being a broadsword but was with flames, it was so bright it might have blinded a regular man, but not Rott. He wasn't a human. He just wasn't. The wound he had taken had disappeared. It was like he was an undead warrior, but maybe not might, but be.

I took another swipe with my broadsword, slow, sloppy and sluggish because of the sheer weight which really caught my attention now right at his chest, of course he just had to step out of the way and then he kicked me right into the door, it hit my back so hard and hurt so bad I collapsed to the ground, almost completely but I was still trying to recover.

He walked over, slowly and then raised the sword of flames and his golden sword, to take the final sweep.

I was hopeless, I had nothing to defend myself with. I couldn't do anything, I was dead, just dead.

Then behind him I see a light, a little white light, nothing much but enough to make itself a difference from the surroundings, I see it radiate more and then a man walks through, a pirate looking man, but he was faint, it was a spirit. He unsheathed a sword, a glistening sword of white and stabbed Rott right through his heart, or where it was supposed to be.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

He twisted the sword and then takes it out causing more screaming from Rott. But for some reason, Rott is still standing, the wound is patched up in seconds but by that time I was standing already. The spirit kicks him in the back, going towards me, I move out of the way, grab my sword back and let him crash. Then I stab him with both of my swords. He screams in utter pain. I take those out but then they patch up too.

Rott turns around and speaks this:

Gah, spirits coming from the dead. What is this? You shouldn't be alive you spirit, you shouldn't have came, I'll make sure next time that Roger enlists you into his army. You'd be a great man for him to be controlled for the rest of eternity. But this time you won't escape his clutches. Muahaha!!!

Green smoke starts to emit from his body, gather and then he is surrounded by it. Then visibility is impossible with him. I see nothing, nothing at all. Then the smoke disappears, along with Rott, just like Roger did.

I turn around and see the spirit. I asked who he was and he said:

I'm a mere spirit, my name is Raaem. I was slayed by Navy Veteran during a raid, right in the back and then before I died Jolly was in front of me. He promised me revenge on the Navy, if I joined his army. I accepted but only was returned grief and sorrow. I ran away, but doing so made me a spirit, I only have this sword now to protect me. Nothing else. I see you defeated Jolly, or only holded him back from this island.

I told him, then realized he might be able to solve that riddle I had. I asked him if he could help me with this riddle and he agreed.

Hmm, a man who flies away. I think I know who. A man who flies away is a man never able to caught, who is almost caught, but escapes in the last seconds of either demise or redemption. The man is tricky though, don't think you'd be able to just get the info out of him. Go to Tortuga, and have this sword, this sword might be able to do this for you. It's a Seven Seas Cutlass, legendary and powerful, you may be able to stop Roger and anybody else with the weapon you're looking for. Good luck, but don't think we wont see each other again, I'll meet you again soon enough, whether you're dead in Jolly's Army or you're alive.

He started to fade away, with a grin, evil grin by what it looked like but I still didn't have a man! I shouted out to him, " Wait who is it! "

Jack Sparrow...

And he disappeared leaving me alone, in the day, in a silent Padres Del Fuego.
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That's chapter 10. I'm going to introduce new people in here to create some more mystery soon. Hope you like it, comment below and I'd appreciate it! Thanks a ton!

Like the action scene......

Pretty good..... Potions Pirate would approve ^-^

Thanks for reviews. Gonna post this chapter now! With a few more people...

Chapter 11
The Crew

Tortuga.... Tortuga. I was just at Tortuga for heaven's sake! I'm running around the Caribbean for no apparent reason! Time to stowaway again...

As I head over to the dockworker, and talk to the man I ask him if he could put me in the box, and head me to Tortuga. He said sure, but it'll cost ye. Few gold pieces will be good.

As I pat my pockets I hear no clinking.

I'm out of gold. I'm broke. I told the Dockworker " Err um, I'm outta gold, Could you transport me anyways....?"

The dockworker said:

Ye cheap landlubber! This business is hard work, if I don't get my due then you don't get your stowaway transportation. Now shoo before I whack you in the head with me hammer ye bilge rat!

He shoos me away while I have no way to get to Tortuga. I might as well run into the bar, and see what's going on in there, might find a crew...

I walk in with the door slamming quickly, and very loud. As I walk in the bar is hectic, I see a group of pirates, walking by the bar, I see a man in a beard, he had a dark hat, similiar to Barbossa's hat, the man I saw in the cave. He had jewelry on his left eyebrow, and on his nose as well. He had the impression of a skull tattoo on his face, and he wore a coat, by the looks of it, an expensive coat that they don't give to some of those lowlifes. He had boots, dark by the looks of it and dark pants as well. He had a green vest, and belt on, but the belt had no buckle. Others were gathering around him as well. IT looked like, he was the crew leader.

I walk over to him, and say,

"Hey you! Are you a crew leader?"

The mysterious man replies,

Ye be right ye scallywag, I am the crew leader. It seems ye be wanting to join, and we'd happily take you, of course my crew is more high stakes than others. We live by the code, and if you don't listen to me, yer journey may be cut short. I am Delmaria Darkskull, CAPTAIN Delmaria Darskull, owner of the Sea Dragon, but anybody in my crew refers to me as Captain Del. So, ye wanting to join?

I think about it for a moment, and then I say, "Yes"

HA, good. We be needing another helping hand around me ship. But be warned, me crew be more tough than you think, and they are more powerful than you might ever be. My crew is not an easy way to live, we take hardships and make compensations in order to become the most savviest pirates of the Caribbean. In other words, this ain't no crew for the faint of heart. And you'll be a prospect to us, until you prove us your worth. Now ain't no time to talk, time to tell you who is who in this crew.

I then ask, " Who's that short guy right there? He part of the crew?"

Don't ye be insulting Andrew, Andrew is a great swordsman, marksman and is very skillful in the art of voodoo. Ye best not try to infuriate the man, ye might be on the floor after that...

And the man next to him, the one with a mustache, curly mustache, and a nice looking pirate hat. He's William Goldwalker. He's skilled in almost everything. He knows how to hold a cutlass, to knowing how to fix a cannon. He ain't no easy boy here, we work him hard, and pay him better.

I say, " Who's the girl? Ain't that a curse to have a woman on board?"

She ain't no curse to us. THe girl is Potions Pirate. She is a master of potions. She's gotten us out of more situations than all of us together. She needs us, we need her. Done deal.

Then I ask another question to Captain Del, which looked like he was geting irritated a tad. "Who's the guy dressed in dark?"

He's The Pirate of Wisdom, not the best at wielding a cutlass, but he knows more and sees more than any of us. His wits have helpd us infiltrate navy forts, escape from the undead, and see invasions coming. He is one of the best.

The man with no coat on, that's Jack Firesteel. He is gifted with power. He knows how to wield a cutlass, throw knives, and is gifted with a power to use Bloodfire weapons. Bloodfire weapons are powerful weapons, that give off a heat and gives off flame, so powerful, it is said that a true user could burn down Padres if he felt like it. Or she.

And the man right there, also dressed in black is Delpadros Darkskull, me son, and first mate. Listen to him, or else you'll face the gallows. He is gifted into seeing the futures if Calypso grants his wish. He can sense enemies surrounding us, and senses ambushes. You see, I abandoned my wife, I couldn't take her anymore. She was annoying, and she was pregnant. We ran away together searching for freedom, and to rid her annoyance to us.

All in all, ye better find a talent quickly, because if ye don't then you'll be in the ocean. Along with the sharks. We'll see you in the morning. Get some sleep in your ship. You're to report here at 7 in the morning. Don't be late.

Or else you'll be stuck here.

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That's chapter 11. Hope you enjoyed!

*applauds*

Hurrah, Potions Pirate ^-^ Her real name is....

I don't know who that Delmaria fellow is, but he sounds like a very savvy, smart, and extremely charming fellow ~_~ LOL :D

But honestly, I liked it, Dog. Just be a little careful with the wording, I spotted a few mishaps like "most savviest" and stuff like that (although I can't say I'm not one to fall victim to typing errors - LOL :D)

Nice job mate. Haha, way to somehow poke fun at Andrew even when he isn't here... haha, but I like the description of the guildies. You do it well mate.

Del you are such a copy cat. I was about to say something like that... -_- lol But thanks for putting me in your story Dog, I love this story! Oh yeah and I do feel like burning down Padres. Just to get back the old one :)

Chapter 12
Sea Battle

6 o'clock in the morning I wake up, early enough to get ready for the journey ahead. As I grab me cutlass, I head out the door of my ship and already see Captain Del already out.

Yer up early Dog, looks like ye might be fit to fit in the crew. But the only reason I'd be here is that I'm lookin' for a crew, and can't see to find any today. Seems that the tide ain't going right for today.

As soon as he finish the word "today" a man with a grey beard and grey hair. He shouts:

Ah Delmaria! It's been to long! I haven't seen you in forever. How's the crew going for you, and I see you're still living after that fort infiltration.

Captain Del replies with:

Ah Francis, I am doing good. Getting a little rusty in a few bones, but I can manage. I see you comandeered a fine EITC Warlord right there, full with ammunition by the looks of it. Ye have any extra crew members with ye? Today's been a slow day and I can't seem to find any sort of willing pirates to hope aboard the Victory Shark.

Yes I do Delmaria, I shall send some right now, gimme a moment. Hey John! Get over here!

I see a shaggy man running right to the old man.

Get about 20 crew members to help Delmaria here with his ship, and hurry it up or you'll be facing the gallows!

Aye Captain!

Well Delmaria, seems I must go, I apologize but the time is right for me to leave, do not sink with me crew members, I value them. They are already at your ship, I'd hurry before they leave. Fair winds, Delmaria.

And fair winds to you as well, Francis.

Let's go Dog, we don't have all day! Crew mates board me Victory Shark! Get the guns loaded and prepared for any battle! Potions Pirate put your cannoneer drafts into the cannons first! Hurry it up or the sharks will be finding a good meal today!!!

I see all the crew members running aboard, and I am shoved into the ship as well by probably Captain Del, and I hop aboard the ship getting ready. I see the crew members below loading the guns, along with the rest of Del's crew getting ready for battle with the upper cannons. The ship was a Ship of the Line, from where he got it I had no clue, but I had a feeling that the sails were torn off once.

Set sail mates!!!

The sail straps are let go and we are full steamed ahead heading straight to Tortuga. As I grab a cannon and start to load a cannon into it, it came natural as I was born with a talent to load a cannon. I place the cannonball inside, and then stuff it all inside, packed together tightly, ready for a sea battle. When I hear Captain Del shouting at me to come to him.

Dog, you're new so I must give you the speech, you listen to me, and you will listen to me. On MY Ship of the Line you shall listen, fire when I say fire, and broadside when I say broadside. Is that clear?

I nod.

Good, now then let's see how good you are with that cutlass of yours, in a flash he unsheathed his sword, revealing a nice, sharp sword, exactly like mine, and comes down to take a cleave on me.

Before he could do that I take a step to the right and dodge, unsheathe my sword and do an uppercut in his blade creating an arc above my head, crashing the blade into the wood causing it to get stuck. As I am about to disarm Cap'n Del, he kicks me right in the chest knocking me back into the railway behind me, and takes out his sword. Walking towards me and putting both hands on his hilt, getting ready for a final blow, before he could start to move this two hands in an arc I boost up both of my legs and kick him right in the stomach with both of my feet, crashing him into the wheel. And making him fall to his knees.

Hehe, you're good, you may not be the worst swordsman there is, you'll be fine aboard me ship for now, but let's see how you gun later.

I see Delpadros running up the steps of the Ship of the Line, and then he speaks:

Captain! An EITC Ship of the Line Treasure ship is reported on the starboard side! Shall we engage, the ship is alone as the other pirate ships are battling it out with a Tyrant.

Aye, Delpadros, shout it, we shall engage.

Delpadros then screams:

CREW!!!! Get ready for battle! Starboard side! Ship of the Line sighted starboard side! Get ready or ye won't be getting a share of the profits!

As the crewman run to their cannons, I see Del pointing to my cannon, and I run off there.

The EITC Ship is getting closer, and closer and closer until it's only a minute away, I hear a shout,

Fire on my command!

As I get me gunpowder lighter ready, I have it lit and get it ready to fire away with the cannon. As we see the ship of the line, it's massive, and almost as big as ours, but ours was a little bigger, and had bigger cannons as well. And then we are suddenly right next to it, and I lose all feeling, the feeling that these people, killed my father, I wanted revenge, but I couldn't move either, it was like I was paralyzed when all of a sudden....

NOW! OPEN FIRE!!! RELEASE ALL GUNS, BROADSIDE STARBOARD!!!

When his last word was ended, I had lit the gunpowder and 3 seconds after that, the guns shot blasting into the ship, what I noticed is that everybody shot in unision surprising for a bunch of pirates that can't stand on their two feet after drinking a bottle of rum.

I hear the crashing of cannonballs into wood right into the ship, and hear an explosion right in the distance, a cannonball had shot right into a gunpowder barrel causing a massive explosion damaging the ships, and released all the cannons to go hectic in the ship running around everywhere, that much weight running around made the ship unstable, causing it to be unable to fight.

Now mates! Shoot the grappling hooks and get the wooden boards, prepare for battle! Do not let them escape!

As the planks are set, and the grappling hooks too, along with the ropes, we board the ship and see about 50 EITC Assassins on board.

But for some reason, right when we hit the deck they all just magically died, it was like a miracle. As we board the ship back nobody question it, and I see about 10 crew members holding a fancy chest, a Loot Skull Chest but only bigger than the one I found from the Graveyard at Port Royal.

Captain Del then yells:

Ya'll shall get your share right when we dock which is only a few minutes away, you will get random treasures, whether good or bad I don't know and get your profit of gold. Ye did good, but don't think I'll go easy on you next time.

Minutes later we dock, and I'm headed a sheathe, what's in it I don't know, I know that everybody gets one, whether good or bad I have no idea. As I unsheathe it, a stroke of black waves follow it, the sword had power, I could feel it flow down my veins, and then Captain Del walks over saying,

Just got word, Jack's here, but he's trapped in Thieve's Den, we'll raid tomorrow, get ready and nice Black Shark Blade ye got there, best weapon I think is out there, than that cruddy old El Patron sword. Report here 7 sharp, or you'll be left here.

Final chapter is coming out in a few days. Look out for a new thread after the next chapter.

Very nice. Can't wait :)

Very good story kept me entertained for a while! ;)

Yes sorry about everything... school is jumping on me, because I'm taking Algebra 1 Honors I have alot of homework, and not alot of time, no chapters for the next few weeks. Sorry.

The Final Chapter
Trickery

It be tis morning, the skies shine blue, the townsfolk already at work with their daily life, you could hear the chickens, and the fine early morning breeze along with it. As I stride over to the docks, where I am supposed to be, I see a mysterious man in black, a shady fellow who seems to have no business here, and if he did, it wouldn't be a good piece of business.

As I see the man walk quickly towards the Tortuga Swamps, I see him take out a cloaked dagger, a shiny dagger, that had a dark aura resonating from the whole entire dagger.

He walks over and throws it right at a gator, stabbing it right at it's neck and causing instantaneous death. The gator then turned not into a soul, but into a darkness creature, the darkness surrounded it, and then made it grow until it was a gator of pure shadows.

As I hide behind an abandoned house, and watch this abomination, I quickly duck when the EITC Soldier, glances directly at me, he had heard something, but he didn't know what.

He quickly shrugged off his thought of walking over where I was, and then headed over to the rest of the houses, through a clear of the trees he walks by and then throws a dagger at each and everyone of the gators, each piercing right through the thick, and durable hide and turning the simple gator that Roger controlled, into a host of darkness. Then he throws a dagger right in the center of a lump of land, and I see a wave of darkness resonate from it, and then released, he then mumbles a few words, and walks to the house.

When he walks to the two houses near each other, both abandoned in what seems like decades, or centuries he then grabs a clear bottle, full of a dark liquid. It had a horrible smell, even from where I was I could smell the horrible, funky smell of this liquid. Whatever it was, it wasn't good.

He walks back to the dagger, and pours it around it, causing a dark aura to surround it.

The fog was incredibly thick, and impossible to see through. It quickly surrounded the cloaked man, and also the dagger. The gators watched this spectacle as the event occured, staring their dark eyes right into the center of the fog, while I could feel the energy radiating off of the fog, the darkness was strong here, and what was here, I didn't know, but it was NOT, a good sign.

And then, when the fog grew to it's thickest point, it started to fade away to the air, and then I can see the cloaked man, and then a man I recognized, it was....

Jolly Roger.

I then murmured in a quiet voice,

Jolly Roger, here? What is he doing here, and why did the cloaked man not die from his need of power? What in the Caribbean is going on here?!

As I continue to watch the ceremony as it looked like, I see the fog disappear completely, and the cloaked man stepped back, and gave his respects to Jolly Roger.

I then heard Roger speak. He spoke these words.

Javier.... there you are. I was thinking the Pirates have slayed you. Is there word of the new daggers?

The mysterious man replied:

Yes Jolly Roger, the Abu Nar Clan Daggers have been found and are in a shipment to East India Trading Company now, we are expecting this shipment at Tortuga in a few days, I am expecting your undead shall invade when the shipment comes?

Yes yes.... I shall be there to steal the shipment, while the pirates are busy, I shall invade the transport ships and steal the loot, and make sure that the pirates don't gain what should be mine! The Caribbean shall be mine, and I shall find Sparrow! I am seeing that you shall send these gators to destroy the pirates who dare resist? And I exect your soldiers to not protect the pirates as well.

Yes yes, the gators shall attack right before you strike, these gators have hide 10x stronger than the regular gators, and cause a nasty bite. I shall be at your services Roger, I just came to inform you if what the plan is. Also I came to tell you they are sending them in two shipments. The shipmens will arrive, tomorrow, at 3, and after tomorrow at 6. I am hoping you shall be there for both shipments.

I will. I must make haste away from Tortuga. Before one of those scallywag gypsies have scent of my being. I trust ye shall keep everything in order. Oh and yes, one more thing Javier.

Yes?

Kill the spy.

When I heard those three words, my heartbeat skipped, and then I turn and started to run. But when I took my first step shackles erupted right from the ground and grabbed hold of me, entailing me to the shackles, and making me utterly useless.

Let the gators kill him. To make sure they know what human blood tastes like...
hehehe....

Yes Roger...

Roger then disappeared magically, as if he was never there, no trace, no dagger left in the ground, but of course the gators were left. With the gators left, they then all of a sudden broke the trance of watching the event occur, and then attacked without warning all at me.

Luckily I could move my hand just enough to get my new sword, and it cut the shackles and destroyed each one, causing me to be able to defend myself. As the first gator comes to strike, I jump and land right onto the gators back, smashing my boots as far as they could go right into it's hide.

Nothing.

I take my sword up and try to stab right in between the two armor platings on it, and when it stabbed right through, I could hear the hissing of it going right through the hide. Then the gator started to moan and groan, and then the dagger suddenly started to disintegrate from it's back, and the gator returned to a soul, and then died and had not a trace remaining.

After that performance the gators all got shaky, and started to make a run for it.

I could see the cloaked man right there, watching me, but I couldn't see his face.

The cloaked man then takes a few steps and speaks:

Impressive.... you think that you can stop ME? Roger shall take the Caribbean, and your mind along with it.....

As I grab my pistol from my belt, and shoot it right at him, as he ducks, it catches the hood he was wearing and took it down.

What I saw left me in shock.

What I saw made me totally regret even following him.

The look in his eyes, the darkness staring right at me, pure black just looking at me, creating a hole into my chest.

The textures of his face, all recognizable. But it wasn't him. It wasn't his true self.

It was.

My father.
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That's the final chapter. For this THREAD. A NEW, brand new thread shall be released containing the next sequel to this. I hope you enjoyed this first one!

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Oooohhhhh, very ominious. Nice job Dog!